79 Remain of the Draconic Race

[Misiziri]

[quote="DragonStar"]I love your writing.[/quote]

:'D Thanks, I'm glad I have a new fan! I enjoy writing about dragons, too, so I think you'll be pleased with my next works

[Misiziri]

Am I allowed to double post in here? Part 3 is up ^^

[Azdgari]

Do you plan to introduce individual characters? :3

[Misiziri]

Not for man. Yet. Not until the preface is over. I do plan to introduce many dragons and wyverns, Serpents have no name and the Hydra doesn't need one.
By the way, is the 'emotion' thing a little too cheesy?

[Azdgari]

Not to me! ^^

[Misiziri]

Wow, seriously? Thank you! I ask for far too much Could you do a semi-in-depth critique of Preface 2 and 3? I really want to improve my writing. I think I have a lot of good ideas, just need to improve vocabulary and grammar, sentences and such... I think I'm pretty good at establishing diverse character personalities, at least I hope so...

[Azdgari]

How in depth? Would you like me to really sink my teeth in? :3

[Misiziri]

If... if you like Whatever works for you, I've advertised this enough already, I feel bad xD

[KIFOtheLION]

still good

[Misiziri]

I'm tryin', thank yeh