the catfamily : bouncey's sorrow

[WildSimba]

By the way, that's art theft. Also, fail at trying to remove ABC's watermark.

[bouncey]

[quote="WildSimba"]By the way, that's art theft. Also, fail at trying to remove ABC's watermark.[/quote]
stop it ! i made them my own charecters ! i was not stealing from fan artists !

[WildSimba]

[quote="bouncey"][quote="WildSimba"]By the way, that's art theft. Also, fail at trying to remove ABC's watermark.[/quote]
stop it ! i made them my own charecters ! i was not stealing from fan artists ![/quote]

Your painting over Disneys artwork. This would be art theft, it'd be the same thing if you painted over anyone else's work. This is fine if you don't publish it to the internet, but you did, making it art theft.

[bouncey]

but on animation scorce , people do it all the time to make charecters !

[Annie]

Animation Source is so annoying. Because people DO do it all the time and it makes people think it's right, when it's really not.
I'm afraid on this forum you're not allowed to trace.

[bouncey]

oh , sorry. but i did not know that . well , i guess that i'll be the only one reading this fan fic.

[Annie]

I'm going to remove the image. You can still carry on with your fan-fic, it's just the image that's the problem. However, like others have said you need to work on your spelling and grammar.


EDIT: If you want some FREE lineart to use and paint over, I can provide some if you like?

[bouncey]

yes. but can you show me the pictures ? i need to see if they will work out ?

[Azerane]

I have tried to be helpful and edit some of the grammar. It's not perfect but I gave it a go. The messy grammar simply makes a story hard to read and follow the flow of. Hopefully this will give you an idea and help you if you continue on with the story The part I have italicised is me butting in because I wasn't sure what word you were after. Also, if you're typing the story up in Word, using spell check can help to eliminate any errors you may have missed. I think firefox also has a spell check too?

This is a story of a purple-spotted cat, Bouncey. Bouncey was dreaming peacefully, and this is when our story begins! '' Mumm, I love Lazauza!'' She said, as she rubbed her belly. Bouncey grabbed her toast, but then she saw the bee hive, this was trouble! She climbed the big, red oak tree, she threw a walnut at it. BONG! BANG! The bee hive fell, and bust open.
''Uh, oh!'' Bouncey told herslef as she looked down. BUZZ! BUZZ! With the sound of bees in her ears she ran for dear life! She was cornered and she leaped in the river. Her dream was interrupted by vocies.
''Wake up, little therp (perhaps you meant twirp?)!''
''AHHHHHHH!'' Bouncey screamed.
''Wake up!'' The pink bouncey told her, then she left with Kody. Bouncey frowned.
''Fine, if she ruins my dreams then I'll ruin hers!'' But in order to ruin the pink bouncey's dream, Bouncey would need a lot of help. She went to her best friend, Blackie.
''Oh, it's you! Bouncey, what do you want? This better not be one of those adventures!'' She scoffed. Blackie hated adventures, since the treasure adventure was chaotic!
''No, it's not. I need help sneaking up on my sister'' Bouncey told Blackie.

[WildSimba]

[quote="Azerane"]I have tried to be helpful and edit some of the grammar. It's not perfect but I gave it a go. The messy grammar simply makes a story hard to read and follow the flow of. Hopefully this will give you an idea and help you if you continue on with the story The part I have italicised is me butting in because I wasn't sure what word you were after. Also, if you're typing the story up in Word, using spell check can help to eliminate any errors you may have missed. I think firefox also has a spell check too?

This is a story of a purple-spotted cat, Bouncey. Bouncey was dreaming peacefully, and this is when our story begins! '' Mumm, I love Lazauza!'' She said, as she rubbed her belly. Bouncey grabbed her toast, but then she saw the bee hive, this was trouble! She climbed the big, red oak tree, she threw a walnut at it. BONG! BANG! The bee hive fell, and bust open.
''Uh, oh!'' Bouncey told herslef as she looked down. BUZZ! BUZZ! With the sound of bees in her ears she ran for dear life! She was cornered and she leaped in the river. Her dream was interrupted by vocies.
''Wake up, little therp (perhaps you meant twirp?)!''
''AHHHHHHH!'' Bouncey screamed.
''Wake up!'' The pink bouncey told her, then she left with Kody. Bouncey frowned.
''Fine, if she ruins my dreams then I'll ruin hers!'' But in order to ruin the pink bouncey's dream, Bouncey would need a lot of help. She went to her best friend, Blackie.
''Oh, it's you! Bouncey, what do you want? This better not be one of those adventures!'' She scoffed. Blackie hated adventures, since the treasure adventure was chaotic!
''No, it's not. I need help sneaking up on my sister'' Bouncey told Blackie.[/quote]

Fixing the grammer didn't really help with the organization of the story. WTF is even going on in it?