A Poem By Me?

A Poem By Me?

Postby SarabisMate » March 16th, 2010, 10:18 am

My "Whispers In The Dark" will carry you to the light.
As this is "Far From Over".
That's why my "Favorite Disease" is taking it's toll.
As "You Are Familiar".
Is to "What I Want".

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The bold words are song titles from Rev Theory,Secret & Whisper,Skillet and Daughtry.
I hope you like it :)
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby Mike » March 16th, 2010, 11:20 am

creative ^.^ Pretty novel idea =)
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby Kina » March 16th, 2010, 3:57 pm

I like it, SM. It's creative, and has good imagery. ^_^
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby SarabisMate » March 16th, 2010, 7:42 pm

Why thank you this is quite a first for me. lol :)
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby Kina » March 16th, 2010, 8:34 pm

*Smiles* I'd say you did pretty good, then. :D
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby SarabisMate » March 16th, 2010, 10:00 pm

Thanks again my friend :) generally this means alot to me. ^^
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby Ushujaa » April 8th, 2010, 3:30 am

nice poem i like the idea of using song titles for your poetry nice job!
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby RayCat » April 8th, 2010, 4:09 am

Very nice poem SarabisMate ^^ very creative indeed!
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby SarabisMate » April 8th, 2010, 4:23 am

thank you I might just make another one. :)
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Re: A Poem By Me?

Postby CheetahCat » April 8th, 2010, 7:48 am

Very nice, keep it up. :)
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