Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby KingKovu44 » February 14th, 2011, 9:50 pm

All right, here is the Sonic fic I mentioned in the thread about my OC Mira. Unless specifically noted, Sonic's friends are around his age. The '11 in the title refers to the fact that I created this version in early January of this year. I will be updating at my leisure. "Squirrmunk" is a term I made up for Sally, referring to her squirrel father and chipmunk mother. No bashing or flaming of any sort please.
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Chapter 1

Princess Sally Acorn sat in her chambers within Castle Acorn, looking out the window at the city of Mobotropolis. The sunshine that shone through illuminated the lovely princess, causing her beautiful red hair and brown fur to shine and her lovely blue eyes to sparkle with dazzling brilliance. At the moment, she was feeling sad. The issue was that, according to the law of her father’s kingdom, the Kingdom of Acorn, she was soon supposed to marry a prince from one of the other Mobian kingdoms, but all of the princes that had come seeking the beautiful squirrmunk’s hand had been selfish and arrogant. They only wanted to marry her for her beauty, not for love. Thus, she had rejected each and every one of them. Sally sighed as she remembered all those times. Just then, there was a knock at the door.

“Come in,” Sally said.

The door opened, revealing Sally’s parents, King Max Acorn and Queen Alicia Acorn.

“Are you here to talk about this whole marriage thing?” Sally asked.

“Yes. Sally, you need to stop rejecting every suitor that comes to call,” Max replied.

“But Daddy, they’re all egotistical braggarts,” Sally answered.

Max sighed.

“Look, Sally, it’s not just the law. I’m not going to be around forever and I want to make sure you’re provided for,” he stated.

“Provided for? Do you think I can’t take care of myself?” Sally retorted.

Max felt himself getting frustrated.

“Look, you will never have the responsibilities that Elias will have, unless of course something was to happen to him. If that were to become true, you would need someone to rule with you,” the king continued.

“Speaking of Elias, why aren’t you forcing him to find a spouse?” Sally asked.

“Your brother will find a wife soon enough. Right now, he studying to be a proper king,” Max said with a frown.

Sally looked at her father irritatedly.

“And let me guess, she has to be a princess,” she replied.

Max had had enough.

“Yes. That is the law,” he said.

“I want to marry for love,” Sally stated.

Max looked his daughter in the eyes, ignoring her statement.

“Now, Sally, I have arranged a meeting with one more prince. He will be coming soon. I want you to give him a chance,” he told her.

“Who?” Sally asked.

“He’s a prince of the Kingdom of Hedgehog, the largest, wealthiest and most powerful kingdom on Mobius,” Max explained.

Sally knew what her father was talking about. The kingdom of Hedgehog was indeed the largest and most powerful kingdom the Mobian race had ever seen. As for its royal family, it was said that the family had, in the days of its ancestors, been given extraordinary powers after absorbing large amounts of chaos energy. From then on, each family member, on both the king and queen’s sides of the family, boasted these powers, in different ways. It was said that the king was the strongest being on Mobius, while the queen could shapeshift into a fierce lioness. With regard to their children and other children and other family members, Sally had never heard of what their powers were. She was now quite curious about it.

“Very well. I will meet him, but I can’t guarantee that I’ll accept him,” Sally answered.

“All I ask is that you give him a chance,” Max replied.

The king then turned and left. Sally sighed.

“Why do we even have this stupid law that I have to marry a prince?” the young squirrmunk said in immense frustration.

Alicia sat down next to her daughter.

“If it makes you feel any better, when I married your father, I wasn’t a princess,” the queen said.

Sally looked up.

“But why was he allowed to marry you?” she asked.

“At the time, a suitable princess couldn’t be found, so as a member of one of the leading noble families, I was chosen instead,” Alicia replied.

Sally gave a slight smile and hugged her mother.

“Thanks, Mom. I feel better now,” she said.

“You’re welcome, dear,” Alicia answered.

Mother and daughter then left the room together. Meanwhile, in the Kingdom of Hedgehog, in the royal palace in the capital city of Knothole, the preparations for the prince’s journey to Mobotropolis, which would happen in two days’ time, were underway. Overseeing it all were the king, Levi, and the queen, Aleena. Levi was a handsome hedgehog with yellow fur and blue eyes. He was indeed the strongest being on Mobius. Aleena was absolutely gorgeous, with purple fur, long, flowing, silken purple hair and beautiful golden-brown eyes. She also possessed an incredibly beautiful, lean, lithe body. As with Levi’s strength, the stories of her turning into a lioness were true. Levi and Aleena’s love was the stuff of legend in the Kingdom of Hedgehog, and it was this love that had given rise to the royal triplets: Sonic, a handsome blue-furred male hedgehog with the power of great speed, Sonia, a beautiful magenta-furred female hedgehog with the power of invisibility and Manic, a handsome green-furred male hedgehog with the power to freeze things solid with a mere touch. Of the two princes, it would be Sonic who would be seeking Sally’s hand, and who would one day sit on the throne. At the moment, Levi and Aleena were relaxing in one of their vast palace’s several relaxation chambers. With them were their close friends. Sitting closest to the king and queen were Chuck, a hedgehog with pale blue fur , a grayish-white mustache and power over the element of earth who was Levi’s younger brother and his Grand Vizier as well as the kingdom’s leading scientist, a pretty red-furred female hedgehog with power over the element of wind named Hana who was Chuck’s wife and Aleena’s sister, two echidnas, an orange-furred male named Hector and his pink-furred wife Lila-Le, who served as the royal family’s bodyguards, a pair of French-accented coyotes, Armand D’Coolette, who was the kingdom’s supreme general, and his wife Vivian, a pair of Red foxes, Amadeus Prower, who was Armand’s lieutenant and the head of palace defense, and his wife Rosemary, a pair of wolves, a brown-furred male named David, the guardian of the royal treasury, and his white-furred wife and fellow guardian Shaleena, a pair of rabbits, a golden-brown-furred male with a slight southern accent named Hiram Rabbot, who served as Levi’s majordomo, and his cream-furred wife Vanilla, a pair of leopards, a black-furred male named Aaron and his normal-colored wife Thamani, who served as the guardians of the royal archives, and a pair of Australian-accented raccoons, a male named Mick and his wife Sue, who performed various tasks around the palace. At the moment, they were all discussing Sonic and his impending departure.

“I hope Sonic is successful,” Hana said.

“I hope so too, but I think he will manage to win over the princess of the Kingdom of Acorn,” Levi said.

“I agree,” Aleena answered.

“But what if she doesn’t?” Aaron said.

“Then he will start looking elsewhere. Remember what the law states,” Levi answered.

Aaron remembered the law. It stated that a prince or princess was able to marry whomever they found worthy. The leopard smiled.

“Well, it’s not like he doesn’t have a wide assortment of possible brides available. For example, my daughter has had flirtations with Prince Sonic in the past,” he said.

Levi chuckled.

“Indeed. But, it is up to him,” the king replied.

The conversation continued. Meanwhile, in another chamber, Sonic’s siblings and friends were throwing a “good luck” get-together for him. The triplets’ group of friends consisted of Hector and Lila-Le’s hot-headed, red-furred son Knuckles, the two daughters of Hiram and Vanilla, an attractive young adult rabbit with golden-brown fur named Bunnie and a six year-old rabbit with cream-colored fur named Cream, Mira, a lovely leopardess who was Aaron and Thamani’s daughter, Armand and Vivian’s son Antoine, who was known for three things: his practice with the sword, his extremely poor grasp of the English language and for being a complete coward, David and Shaleena’s black-haired, silver-furred daughter Lupe, two twin sister wolves with pink fur named Leeta and Lyco, Amadeus and Rosemary’s ten-year old son Miles, who was notable for having two tails, which gave him his nickname of “Tails”, Mick and Sue’s hyperactive eight-year old daughter Marine and Manic’s girlfriend, a yellow-furred, lilac-haired mongoose named Mina. Also prominent in the group was eleven-year old Amy Rose Hedgehog, a pink-furred hedgehog with green eyes who was Chuck and Hana’s daughter and Sonic, Sonia and Manic’s cousin. She was noted for having a major crush on Tails, often playfully proclaiming that she would marry him one day.

“I hope you succeed, Sonic,” Amy said.

“Any girl who marries you is lucky,” Mira added.

Sonic smiled at the leopardess that he had had several flirtations with in the past. Though they had never been a true couple, they had shared a kiss once or twice during the course of these flirtations.

“Thanks, Mira,” the speedy blue hedgehog answered.

It was then that Sonia stood up and raised her drink.

“I propose a toast. To my brother, the future king!” she stated.

The others raised their drinks.

“To Sonic, the future king!” everyone exclaimed.

They all toasted. Manic then looked at Sonic.

“Hey, bro, do you remember what you said when Mom and Dad told us that you would be king?” he said.

“Yes, I remember. I just don’t want to say it,” Sonic replied.

“Well, I remember too. It was ‘Oh I just can’t wait to be king’,” Sonia stated.

Knuckles started to snicker a bit.

“You actually said that?” the echidna said.

“I got excited. Now can we drop it?” Sonic asked.

Knuckles just snickered again. It was then that Bunnie, who was Knuckles’ girlfriend, stepped in.

“Sugar, I know plenty of embarrassing stories about you that I picked up from your folks, so drop it,” the rabbit said in her strong southern accent.

Knuckles then dropped it. The group enjoyed the celebration and had a good time. The day wore on. That night, back in Mobotropolis, as she headed for her room, Sally was stopped by Elias.

“Sally, I just want you to know that even if it doesn’t work out with the prince of the Hedgehog kingdom, I’ll do all I can to ensure your happiness,” Elias said.

Sally smiled.

“Thank you, Elias,” she replied.

Brother and sister shared a hug and then continued on their way. Everyone needed their rest, for the preparations for Sonic’s arrival had to be finalized. As she fell asleep, Sally hoped that the coming prince was not like all the others.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby Chumvikingpride » February 14th, 2011, 11:01 pm

Waah! Frankly, I liked, a suite please!
In addition there is Knuckles!
I' like the reference to the IJCWTBK lion king!
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby KingKovu44 » February 14th, 2011, 11:06 pm

Thanks! I like Knuckles too, and he plays a fairly large part in this story. As for the TLK reference, I thought that would be a cool addition. I plan on putting more TLK references later.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby Chumvikingpride » February 14th, 2011, 11:12 pm

Great!
And Vector,he will be in history? :3
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby KingKovu44 » February 14th, 2011, 11:16 pm

I'm not sure about Vector. I had planned on including him, but completely forgot about him when listing Sonic's friends. Perhaps later on in the story he'll appear.

At the moment, the story will focus on Sonic meeting and courting Sally and Dr. Robotnik making his evil plans.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby Chumvikingpride » February 14th, 2011, 11:19 pm

I hope there will be vector! :3

Robotnik will it succeed his plans? :p
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby KingKovu44 » February 14th, 2011, 11:30 pm

I'll very likely have Vector appear as one of Sonic, Sonia and Manic's friends who lives outside the palace, since I'll need additional characters as the story progresses.

As for Robotnik, without giving too much away, he'll try, but get his butt kicked. He'll later team up with a more powerful and much more terrifying villain.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby FlipMode » February 14th, 2011, 11:56 pm

This is some really rather interesting fusion of TLK / Sonic :D. Nice to see someone trying something original like this ^^, certainly looking forward to reading more of it, KingKovu44.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby KingKovu44 » February 14th, 2011, 11:58 pm

Thanks FlipMode. I love combining ideas from my favorite series in order to make something new. I will be starting on chapter 2 soon. That's where the story really gets going.
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Re: Sonic '11 (PG13 AU Sonic the Hedgehog fic)

Postby Chumvikingpride » February 15th, 2011, 4:15 pm

There will be another Echidna, genus Tikal ?
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