And When You Walk Away...(Poem)

And When You Walk Away...(Poem)

Postby NightyByeSparrow » November 21st, 2009, 5:00 am

I read LilTiger's poem and this came to mind. :)

Every day
you act like nothing's wrong
you don't even look at me
just walk on by.

And every single day
you walk away from me
like I'm not even there.

When you leave me,
I feel different,
I feel alone.

You've never realized
that there's someone here,
someone who cares,
someone who will always support you.


The end. :innocent:
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Re: And When You Walk Away...(Poem)

Postby Nightstar75 » November 21st, 2009, 5:30 am

Beautiful :( I loved it, really wonderful Sparrow-chan
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Re: And When You Walk Away...(Poem)

Postby CheetahCat » November 21st, 2009, 5:57 am

Really nice poem you've written here, Sparrow. :) I like how it's descriptive. I think you done a marvelous job. ^^
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Re: And When You Walk Away...(Poem)

Postby RayCat » November 21st, 2009, 8:08 am

Awww ^^ I love poems like this. It's really gets your emotions going, nice job!
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