Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby Eli_Ayase » April 7th, 2011, 10:59 am

A Big Apology for my bad English Grammar. I hope you'll enjoy it.
Note: Alexander, Hannah and Natalie (C) NatalieTheLionQueen, Other appearing characters (C) Walt Disney
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Chapter 1: The Truth...
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Once in a warm summer morning, in the streets of London, lived a girl named; Natalie. A happy girl, who always wished to visit the Arabian, every morning she listened to Arabian music and sang along, while she was listening to the music, her mother, Hannah called her down.
“Natalie, can you come down here, please?” Her mother called her.
“Alright I’m coming!” Natalie said, turning the music off.
Natalie rushed down happily and kept singing to herself the Arabian music.
“Take a seat, my dear...” Her mother said, taking a seat.
“What’s wrong mum? Did I do something wrong?” Natalie asked innocently.
“No, no, no... It’s not that... I...” Hannah was about to say, but her husband and also Natalie’s father, Alexander, interrupted her.
“Good morning, my sweet hearts.” Alexander said, coming down the stairs.
“Good morning Dad!” Natalie got up and hugged her father.
“Good morning darling. Can I have a talk with you?” Hannah asked.
“Mum, but you didn’t say what’s wrong.” Natalie said with a little confusing look.
“I’ll tell you after I’m finished talking to your father.” Hannah looked at her daughter.
Natalie was very confused. She waited and waited till they come out from the living room. Mean while, in the living room.
“I thought you told her last night, Hannah. You told me you’ll tell the truth.” Alexander sat down thinking how to tell his daughter, the truth about him, and her brother.
“I didn’t have enough courage, alright? Besides, it’s your secret that you’re a sorcerer not me.” Hannah said.
“I guess you’re right, but will she believe it? That I’m not a normal human like you.” Alexander said worried about that Natalie will never speak to him again.
“It’s not my fault, you wanted to wait till she is enough old to hear it.” Hannah said, and sighted.
“I know, I know. It is my fault, and I agree.” Alexander said, and got up. “Well, let’s go.” Alexander headed to the door.
Natalie was sitting alone in the kitchen, waiting for her parents return. Once, Alexander came out. He saw Natalie in the kitchen.
“Come, my dear.” He said with a sigh, and leaded, Natalie to the living room. “Take a seat.” He said calmly.
“Okay.” Natalie sat down on the couch. “What is going on? Mum first wanted to tell me something, now you want to say something.” Natalie asked and looked confused.
“I and your mum... wanted to tell you yesterday, but, I hope you won’t get angry for this.” Alexander was worried.
“Nonsense, you know I can’t get that easily angry.” Natalie said happily.
“Alright... you see... ugh... watch this.” Alexander raised his hand next to him.
“What???” Natalie looked at her father confusing.
“Ashua!” He said and then a parrot appeared. “You see, this is one that I wan--” He said, but got interrupted.
“Are you fooling me or is it real!?” Natalie looked at her father.
“It’s real my daughter, but the second part of the truth is that you have a brother which lives in Arabian in a place called ‘Agrabah’ and carry’s the same magic as I do, and you... carry it as well.” He said looking at Natalie in her eyes.
“But... why didn’t you tell me before, I have a brother!?” She said surprised.
“We didn’t know how to tell you. We wanted yesterday, but... we thought you were too tired to hear it.” Alexander said innocently. “Well, I guess that you’re thinking that I...” He got interrupted by Natalie.
“No... I’m not thinking what you think... I think that it is wonderful having a brother and some magic” Natalie said smiling at her father.
“Yes it is, but you don’t know him enough, he carries the dark magic that isn’t allowed in the Ministry of Magic. He carries the darkest powers... and so do you... I know that you could never hurt someone, but he isn’t ‘Pure’ hearted, he is dark hearted.” Alexander explained to Natalie the true side of Jafar.
“But why can’t I just ask him to be nice?” Natalie asked curiously.
“Natalie, he doesn’t listen to anyone, and I don’t want him to kill you... he isn’t good hearted as I said.” Alexander explained again.
“Well, maybe he doesn’t know that he has a sister, maybe that’s why he’s evil.” Natalie said happily.
Alexander slapped his face. “You didn’t get it, right? He won’t listen to anyone! And no, he doesn’t know he has a sister.” He said with a sigh.
“Hey, can I visit this place called Agrabah?” She got up and smiled at her father.
“Well, if you want to...” He sighted again.
“I’d love to! I want to see what that place looks like.” She said excitedly.
“Alright, then I guess you’ll be leaving in a few days.” Alexander said with a middle happy smile.
Natalie was excited to go finally to the Arabia. Day by day went on and on, till came the final day in London. She had packed her bag and while she was outside, her father putted a magic learning book, so she could learn better the magic that lies in her. There were few hours left till the plane will set off from the airport. They arrived just in time the plane was about to set off.
“Be careful my precious, take care.” Natalie’s mother Hannah hugged her tight.
“Alright, alright, I will be careful.” Natalie hugged her mother.
“And remember what I told you.” Alexander said hugging Natalie.
“Yes I know.” Natalie hugged his father back.
“Well, looks like your flight is about to leave. Hurry up.” Alexander said and leted Natalie go.
“Bye!” Natalie said with a smile and rushed to the flight.
Once she got in the plane she wishpered to herself. “I just can't wait to see the Arabia...”
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Chapter 2 Coming Soon!
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby Eli_Ayase » April 20th, 2011, 1:01 pm

Alright It took long, sorry. I was a bit busy these days, but here's the second chapter! Enjoy!
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Chapter 2: The Surprise!
After the few hour flight to, Agrabah, Natalie finally arrived. Natalie took her bags and went to the hotel. Once she saw her room, she wasn’t that happy to see and untidy place.
“Well, at least a nice place to live for the few months.” She sighted and sat down on her bed.
Once she unpacked her bad she saw a book
“What’s this? ‘ Your Inner Art of Magic’ this is weird... hmph, probably my dad putted this in. Oh, well, maybe it will come in handy. One day...” Natalie said putting the book in her bag.
“Blah, I think I’m going to take a walk.” She got up and went out of her room. Once she was outside there were many people around. She felt crowded.
“I think I’ll better go take a ride on the camels. This place is way crowded.” She thought to herself leaving the crowds. Once she got out from there, she saw someone having camels.
“May I take a ride?” She asked the camel keeper.
“Sure, young lady.” He said happily seeing someone taking a ride on the camels. “Make sure you return it till sunset.” The camel keeper told her.
“Don’t worry sir, it’ll be back soon.” She said riding on the camel. Few hours passed, the sun was still in the sky, it was very hot, and Natalie couldn’t stand the heat.
“Ugh... who knew this place is hot... oh, wait... I forgot this isn’t London, but the Arabia!” She said riding on the camel and sighted.
“Jeez... I hope there won’t be any wonders today...” She muttered while riding on the camel, but suddenly then, a parrot flew on her shoulder. “What the...” She was surprise to see a parrot flying around the hot place.
“Oh, boy it’s hot today! Where we are going?!” The parrot asked looking at, Natalie.
“You mean where am I going, right? Besides, who are you? And what are you doing in the hot dessert?” Natalie asked the parrot.
“My name is Iago, and I’m looking for a black Genie’s lamp, have you seen it around while riding on this camel?” Iago asked.
Natalie looked at the parrot.
“Are you OK? There is no such thing as a ‘Genie’s Lamp’, It’s only a thing that parents tell to their kids that there is a magic lamp and then suddenly a genie comes out and grants you three wishes.” Natalie explained to Iago.
Iago poked her head.
“Yes there is! If you’ll find it you’ll see.” He sat again on her shoulder.
Natalie felt annoyed.
“Did you had to do that?” She glared at, Iago.
“Hey, I’m just a bird!” He pouted at Natalie.
“Yeah, sure...” Natalie sighted...
After a few minutes, Iago saw something black in the sand.
“Hey! Stop I found something!” Iago flew to the black thing. He tried to pull it out, but he failed. “Eh, a lil help?”
“Sure...” Natalie got off the camel and pulled out the black thing from the sand. It was a black with dark violet genies lamp.
“I guess this is the lamp, right?” She asked giving it to Iago.
“Yeah, it is! But can you please rub it?” Iago asked looking at Natalie.
“Oh, sure and a genie will come out.” Natalie held the lamp.
“Just do it!” Iago said flying up to Natalie.
“Alright, alright! Just don’t poke me...” She said and rubbed them lamp.
Out from the lamp came dark-blood-red smoke. Natalie accidently dropped the lamp and looked at the smoke turning into a genie.
“What the!?” She looked at Iago.
“I told you. Now ca-” Iago got interrupted by the, Genie.
“Iago! What are you doing?!” The genie asked, glaring at him and Natalie.
Natalie kept silent; she was confused seeing a story becoming real.
“I just want you be free. You’re my master and I don’t know what to do without you!” Iago explained sitting on Natalie’s shoulder.
“Sure like she’s going to wish for my freedom.” The genie turned his back to Iago and Natalie.
“Please wish for his freedom...” Iago whispered in Natalie’s ear.
“Uh, yea sure...” Natalie whispered back.
“Are you going to make the three wishes or not?!” He looked at Natalie.
“Look, there is only one wish I want to make. I wish for your freedom.” Natalie said with a sigh.
The genies jaws dropped. And he looked at Natalie.
“You’re sure?” The genie asked.
“Just make that stupid wish, and I’m out from here.” Natalie said and started to walk back to the camel.
The genie made her wish comes true, the genie turned into a slim tall man with a long cloak, a snake staff, and a weird hat.
“Ah, how it’s good to be free... isn’t it right, Iago.” He said looking at Iago.
“Don’t you think you should thank her?” Iago asked.
“I suppose I should...” He said, and then walked to Natalie. “Ahem... thank you for giving me freedom, is there anything else you wish?” He asked kindly.
“First, who are you? Second, I got to return the camel before sunset and third, there’s nothing else I would need.” Natalie turned to him.
“My name is, Jafar, and if I may ask, who are you?” Jafar asked Natalie.
“I’m Natalie, and listen... erm... Jafar, I have no time for talks, the sun is soon setting and I got to return the camel back there.” She pointed from where she came from. “So, if you excuse me, I’m on my way back.” Natalie sat on the camel and started to go back to the camel keeper. Jafar looked at Natalie returning back. He didn’t go after her.
“Let’s go Iago.” Jafar said to Iago going back to their palace.
Back at, the camel keeper. The sun was setting, and Natalie returned the camel just in time. “Oh, I though you are another one who doesn’t listen to me. Thank-You!” The keeper said.
Natalie smiled. “I always do what I am told, and thank-you for letting me have a ride.” She gave money to the keeper for the ride.
“You’re welcome young lady.” He smiled looking at her leave. “Come again soon!”
Natalie returned back to her room in the motel. “Ugh, what a day, full with magic...” She lied down on her bed and watched the sky turning dark. She yawned and soon fell asleep.
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Sorry if this was a short part, I'll try to make the third longer.
Chapter 3 Coming soon!
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby MaxMike01 » April 20th, 2011, 1:14 pm

ice, so far! Keep going, plz! :D
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby Eli_Ayase » April 20th, 2011, 1:15 pm

Thanks, I dunno how long it will take for the third.
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby MaxMike01 » April 20th, 2011, 1:17 pm

Take your time, sweet heart. Story writing can take long.
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby Eli_Ayase » April 20th, 2011, 5:56 pm

Sweet heart? :blush:
What you mean with that XD
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby MaxMike01 » April 20th, 2011, 6:20 pm

Uh, nvm... Just continue on with your story!
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Re: Aladdin: Jafar's Long Lost Sister Natalie.

Postby Eli_Ayase » May 13th, 2011, 5:22 pm

Alright, sorry this is quite a short chapter, but anyway! Enjoy!
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Chapter 3: The Second Time
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The next day, Natalie woke up and felt like she is in a new life. Natalie sighted. “I think I should go practice some magic...” She said to herself, and went off for a walk. She again, as always ended up in the crowds outside. “Oh, great... now which way is out?!” She thought to herself and went out from the crowds. She didn’t saw the camel keeper where she last saw him. “Oh well, I guess a walk won’t hurt anyone.” She said and walked in the hot dessert.
As finally she found a nice and quiet place, she took out the book her father, Alexander putted in her bag. “Uh, let’s see, what’s the easiest spell?” She opened the book and found the easiest spell. “A—Acheeho avis!” As she said the words, from her hand flew out a bird. “Eh, would’ve been a lot easier if I had a wand...” She muttered, and continued her magic.
Somewhere around the desserts, Jafar was resting in his home on a chair and thinking how to become a sultan. His first try’s failed a while ago before he got trapped in the genies lamp.
“If only I knew who would help me a little,” Jafar said.
Iago flew and sat on his shoulder. “Maybe you should ask that girl who you saw yesterday which gave you freedom.” Iago said.
“And would you please tell me where she can be?” Jafar said with a bored look on his face.
“Maybe she is again in the dess---” Iago got interrupted.
“She?! Alone, in the dessert?! Hah! By the look she isn’t stupid enough to not know the venomous creatures in the dessert.” Jafar got up and walked to the window.
Iago sighted and flew on the edge of the window. “Guess you’re right...” As Iago turned his head outside, he saw something moving and doing magic. “Hey, who’s there?” Iago pointed at the spot where, Natalie was training her magic.
Jafar looked at the place where Iago showed. “Hm, I wonder who he/she is.” Jafar said.
“Maybe we should go see?” Iago flew around and was ready to go.
“Alright, let’s go.” Jafar walked out from his home and headed with Iago to the direction where Natalie was training.
Meantime, Natalie was already controlling very well some fire spells. “Uh, who knew magic is hard?” She said and continued the Water Lion spell which was quite not listening to her. The lion approached Natalie with a evil smile. “Ehehe, N-nice kitty.” She said and smiled innocently. The water lion jumped on Natalie, but it didn’t have a chance. Natalie suddenly freezed it with her hand, the lion was an ice sculpture and it fast melted from the hot sun. “God, that was close...” She sighted and sat down in the sand. Natalie saw something coming and got fast up. “Hey, who’s there?!” She saw someone with black clothes. Nobody answered; Natalie accidentally fired a fire phoenix out from her hand to the moving tall man with black clothes.
It was Jafar who was coming. Jafar saw phoenix flying towards him “What the!?”
He raised his hand and the phoenix turned into ashes. Natalie saw everything
it was Jafar again.
“What the!? How in the heavens name you!?” She said and remembered what her
Father said about someone who had the dark power.
Jafar stood in front of her. “How it’s nice to see you again, Natalie.” Jafar bowed a little.
“Eh, yea, yea, it’s nice to see you as well Jafar...” she walked off with her book.
Jafar took Natalie by her arm. “Wait, wait, wait, where are you going, and why you are leaving so fast?” Jafar asked, Natalie holding by her arm.
“I… I’m just…eh…uh, nowhere…” Natalie smiled innocently.
Jafar looked at her suspiciously “And may I ask, what was that a while ago I saw?” Jafar asked looking in the sky.
“Eh, that? That was... eh, nothing.” Natalie tried to make a non-nervous voice.
“Nothing?” Jafar looked at the ashes from the Phoenix bird. “I can say that the ‘Nothing’ that almost burned me and it flew from your hand, am I right?” Jafar said.
“Eh, yes it did, but I didn’t know whose coming!” Natalie said quickly.
Jafar turned around and started to think. “Hmm, if she is a sorcerer like I am, then I can just ask her help and become the sultan!” He thought to himself, and then said. “Alright... but one more question,” he said turning back to Natalie. “Would you like to come to home? And we can have a little talk why you even arrived here.” Jafar said calmly.
“Eh,” Natalie paused a little. “I’d be happy to.” She said with a smile.
Jafar smiled “How wonderful... let’s go.” He said with a little evil voice. They all headed off to Jafar’s home. Iago, his parrot was sitting all the time on Natalie’s shoulder and telling her what had happened to Jafar all the time when he tried to become the Sultan and chuckled a little.
Jafar heard Iago chuckling about the past. “Iago! Enough please...” Jafar tried not scaring Natalie with his voice.
“Sorry Jafar...” Iago said innocently.
Man, I don’t like that voice, but, oh well; he can’t be that bad at all.” Natalie thought to herself.
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