Alexander's Wish (HP story with my characters)

Alexander's Wish (HP story with my characters)

Postby Eli_Ayase » December 11th, 2011, 3:50 pm

Just a little very short story thich is based off a bit off from RP with friend on a forum (not MLK). Don't bash me or flame this...
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Silence was around the house for hours ever since Natalie's father, Alexander, got killed by Voldemort. Natlie was the most silent of all in her room, the strong bounds with her and Alexander couldn't break, if death comes between, in her opinion.


It was night, and everyone was asleep. Except for Natalie. She sat on her bed full with sorrow, because Alexander was the best father anyone could wish. Caring, loving, wise, fun and protective, Natallie had lived together with him ever since her mother died, also killed by Voldemort.


Natalie was far depressed, she tought. "Maybe I should kill myself and be reunited with my mother and father?" She took a little look at her wand. Normally, she never dared to use a Unforgivable Curse, but all this was too much for her. She then looked at the picture with her best friends, Harry, Ian, Hermione, Ron, and her Brother Drake. Tears ran down from her eyes knowing she'll cause pain to them all, to professor Lupin, Tonks, Sirius Black, the Weasley's... She and her family were great friends with them all. After remembereing everything, Natalie pointed her wand on her heart, and even struggled to say the Killing Curse. But before she could kill herself, Remus Lupin went by her room and then quickly disarmed her. "Miss Stern?! Are you crazy!?" He went to Natalie and gave her a hug. Natalie didn't answer, she hugged back and kept sheding tears of pain, "I-I'm sorry, professor Lupin. I-I-I just can't take it all anymore..." She murmured as she cried. Remus gave a sigh and still hugged Natalie, he now actually was looking after her, and as well it was Alexander's wish. If he dies, Remus is the one to look after her and take care of her. Natalie still shed tears till a little spark went by her eyes. She looked where the spark stopped and then from it appeared Alexander's ghost. He went to Natalie and placed his hand on her heart, as a sign; That he'll always be with her, in her heart, her dreams, and even in the sunlight and wind. Remus Lupin didn't see it because Alexander only appeared to Natalie. After Natalie felt a warm touch on her heart, she was calm, but tears still came. Alexander then gave a warm smile and a wind as a hug. Ntalie heard voice in her head, the last words of Alexander. "I'm always with you, Natalie, forver till the end..." And then he himself faded away. Natalie was calm and sat on her bed still hearing her fathers words. Remus was a bit puzzled, he didn't understand how did Natalie calm down that fast. "Everything alright, Miss Stern?" He asked. Natalie gave a smile and nod. "Alright then, but please, don't do anything like that again, promise?" Lupin said still worried that Natalie can try and kill herself again. Natalie nodded and said, "I promise professor..." Remus sighed from releif, "Good, now, go to sleep, tomorrow we'll go to Diagon Alley to get the books and everything you need for your 5th year at Hogwarts," he said and then left. Natalie soon went to bed, calm and now knows, that where ever she is, her father will always be with her.


The End.
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Well :D?
Ya I know, sad a bit :C
I cried while wrote this though...

Natalie, Alexander, Drake and Ian (c) Me
Natalie's Profile (if interested): http://nataliestern.deviantart.com/gall ... 6#/d415s2r
Alexander's Profile (if interested): http://nataliestern.deviantart.com/gall ... 6#/d3yrx1t
Rest of the mentioned characters belong to J.K. Rowling

Thank-you to Kopalover for helping me with the title. =)
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I am planning on writing a full story though :)
This is just little bit based off a RP I have with a friend.
Last edited by Eli_Ayase on December 12th, 2011, 11:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: [Please help with a title] (HP story with my characters)

Postby Kopalover » December 12th, 2011, 10:57 pm

Should be called "Alexander's Wish". I love the story, I felt for Natalie when she was sad.
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Re: [Please help with a title] (HP story with my characters)

Postby Eli_Ayase » December 12th, 2011, 11:18 pm

Thank-You, =) and sounds a very nice title, ^^ thank-you again.
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Re: Alexander's Wish (HP story with my characters)

Postby Kopalover » December 13th, 2011, 12:53 am

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Re: Alexander's Wish (HP story with my characters)

Postby KingMoto » December 13th, 2011, 5:50 pm

This was a good little read =] I would like to see more by you! x) Anyway, I agree with the title, good name for it =]
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Re: Alexander's Wish (HP story with my characters)

Postby Eli_Ayase » December 13th, 2011, 8:42 pm

Haha, thanks KM, actually, I have now started to write a Harry Potter fan-fiction of Natalie's first year at Hogwarts x] It'll be up soon now :3
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