A Simple Poem.

A Simple Poem.

Postby SophieCub » July 25th, 2011, 6:56 pm

Everytime I fall I think I will never get back up
Everytime I cry I think I wont stop
Everytime I see my crush I fake a smile
Everytime I smile I know it not real
Everytime I do wrong I dont think I can do right
Everytime I see love I frown
Everytime I think I see my terrible past
Everytime I see a man I think of my dad
Everytime I go to sleep I think of the bad things I did that day..

Life Sucks.. but you know you can make it through..
Lots of people do..
Just hang on..
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Re: A Simple Poem.

Postby TheLionQueen » July 25th, 2011, 6:59 pm

Great poem. Great job. I mean awesome I can't really write poems I write long novels. And I'm pretty sure no one on here will read novels of mine.
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Re: A Simple Poem.

Postby SophieCub » July 25th, 2011, 7:04 pm

Thanks! I find it hard to write long things xD and I will read them! Gimmie links :)
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Re: A Simple Poem.

Postby TheLionQueen » July 25th, 2011, 7:42 pm

Lol sure as soon as I type them up on the computer. It should take a bit infer I'm trying to finish this horror novel.
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