The UnPerfect Crime

The UnPerfect Crime

Postby WildSimba » July 11th, 2011, 6:41 am

The UnPerfect Crime.

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It was dark amoungst the skies, casting only a light from the streetlamps. Traffic was almost casual, for this time of the night. The gravel, which was painted a horrible red in my town was a grimsly sight to view at night. The light reflected from the streetlights onto the sidewalk and road, and made it look almost as if thousands of people had died there at once. Apparantly, this is some peoples sick way of thinking it'll switch things up a little. I personally, don't feel it very appealing to see blood-covered sidewalks everytime I decide to walk at night.

Almost instantly, my jaw started to get a numbing sensation. It felt as if all my teeth were floating around inside of my mouth. My whole face throbbed, felt as if I had been punched multiple times by a very large man. Just as soon as I had realized what happened, it was already entirely to late, I was already being dragged by my feet across the bloodred sidewalk, noone ever able to tell that blood had been oozing from my head at the same rate I was breathing. Bystanders thought maybe the person who was dragging me was perhaps just escorting a drunk friend home.

I knew exactly who it was who had done this, who had hit me with a blunt object and attempted to kidnap me. It was almost an instant reminder of what I did every single night to people. It was almost ironic who it was. It was my friend, Peter, and he had commited various attrocitys with me. I guess you can almost say we were part of a gang.

"Doing well partner?" He said to me, a very taunting look on his face.

"Well, I wasn't expecting to ever see you again, but other then that I'm quite well. In fact the blood squirting out of my head almost feels as if it were biterly something I actually deserved," I replied.

"Well, that little blow to the head was just your first round of what you'll be recieving tonight. The boss had a meeting with all of us last night, and he agreed, your a dead man for betraying us. He told me to kill you, at first. I told him to reconsider, and that we could torture you for a little while. He told me it would be alright. My friend, I don't want to kill you, I don't want to torture you eigther. I want you for myself. We can run away together, and never come back. Escape this lifestyle. So what do you say, pal?" He said, a gleam in his eyes.

"Something tells me I don't have much of a choice," I said.

"No, you don't."
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Re: The UnPerfect Crime

Postby WildSimba » July 14th, 2011, 1:35 am

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When I was a young adult, I was introduced into the gang life by Peter. But I am going to tell you the events leading up to this first. As a kid, I always thought I was going to grow up to be something that would help out many of people, like a fireman, or a police officer. Night after night, I'd sit lay in my bed, reading classic superhero comics. One of my favorites being Batman, really inspired me. He was like the ultimate superhero, he was just a normal guy, who used his enormous fortune to do good.

Well, one day when I was 19, I met this really beautiful in first semester of college. Her lips were like cherry blossoms, her voice melted my heart. Everytime I saw her, I started getting all nervous and clamy. She always wore these super thick black-rimmed glasses, but wore her glorious blonde hair down. I ended up eventually asking her on a date. At first, the date went well. She asked if I'd mind her going to use the bathroom, and I willingly agreed. I sat there, twidling my thumbs, when sudden a big explosion came from across the room. A man in a large black trechcoat emerged from the smoke.

"Okay, all of you will leave now, except for you." He said, and pointed at me. Everyone fleed the place. Suddenly I saw something in his hand, it was my date. He had her on the ground, by her hair. She was bleeding out of her mouth in small amounts.

"Alright men, go and beat that man to death. Make sure he is dead when your finished. We do not want a witness during this situation," he said, and two big, largely built men, went and started stomping me in the face. It felt like someone was rubbing a piece of sandpaper against my face. Suddenly they stopped. I heard a gun shot echo across the room, but couldn't see it, because I had well closed them tight by now. I heard the scream of my date, and then suddenly heard another gunshot, and a tingling pain in my chest. I felt myself drifting away, but not before the man in the trenchcoat said something.

"Well, kid, I guess you know now that fairy tales are never true, and the good guys will never win. Bad guys, in the actual world, will whoop your ass, shoot you in the chest, and leave you for dead. That girl you dated tonight, was a traitor for this organization. She tried to tell me it was really you, so I've decided to kill you both. Oh, and by the way, my name is..." He said, but I passed out before I could hear the name.

So if your wondering what happened, when I came back to being unconscious, I was in the hospital for a month afterwards. When released, I burned all my comic books, and posters, and movies, or anything related to superheroes. I realized you can't live your whole life trying to be a superhero.

And now as it seems, being a bad guy, just has me now being dragged across a sidewalk after being brutally assualted by an old friend.
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Re: The UnPerfect Crime

Postby KopsTheTerminator » July 14th, 2011, 7:55 pm

LOL NO1CURR

Just kidding, this is actually really interesting. A nice break from the TLK fanfics at least. I like the story and perspective, this has potential. I'll be stalking this.

By the way, it's called "imperfect", not "unperfect". Derp.
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