A Wolf's Call

A Wolf's Call

Postby bananahead » June 15th, 2011, 8:49 pm

This is my ORIGINAL work, not a fan-fic or anything. NO ONE may copy, paste or distribute otherwise without my consent. This includes the names.
Anyway, have fun reading! Please give feedback & comments! Thanks! :D 8-)
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CHAPTER ONE
Part I
The land had turned dead ever since the illness came. Our leader, Necro, had been killed. Only the strong had survived; the weak had been left to die. I guess, I don't seem like a fit leader anymore, when he had asked me to kill him, his eyes glaring...
'Kill me, Blue Ice Heart. Kill me and destroy this illness. Don't let it spread...'
I remember when I had killed him, his pleading yet ravaging eyes, so full of illness. I was, always, Necro's favourite child. I had always been the strongest, the bravest, the one with my mother's eyes. My family had died, many were dead now. Their bodies littered the forest floor. Icepack territory had never been so desolate.
The cold wind rustled my pelt as I sat on the edge of the hill, the snow covered hill. It was, where I would announce ceremonies and important news to my pack, Icepack.
"Blue Ice Heart, are you ready to announce our move to them?" It was Buck, a strong wolf for the pack. He was to be the next leader, if he wasn't taken by the illness that is.
"Yes I am, come on, let's gather the pack." I jumped off the hill, and joined Buck as we searched for our fellow wolves.
As we made our descent down the hill, I noticed the great emptiness that had changed our once great home. Buck nodded to me and gathered the wolves together, there were only five now, Koda, Iris, Sanje, Tidra and Luna, not including us two.
I stood before my fellow wolves, hackles raised high, and spoke to them, "Icepack! After the great illness, that has killed many of our pack and our previous leader, Necro, Icepack is getting more and more needy. Many have died of sickness or of the harsh and cold winter nights, but luckily, Luna is expecting pups, the father, as some of you may already know, is Sanje." I looked at Luna, the dominant female, and Sanje, the father of the pups. He was gleaming already, I could tell. A smirk look on his face.
Those were supposed to be my pups, the dominant male or leader, would always mate with the dominant female! It was how packs lived, they wouldn't allow anyone to harbor their pups! I hid my anger and continued, "Though this is not the way of packs, it will give us more pups. Although they may die of the sickness, we cannot risk keeping them in this infected land. I've decided, we move territory. Tonight."

((EDIT: Made it longer. :D And Sanje is said (San-jee))
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Re: A Wolf's Call

Postby TheLionQueen » June 15th, 2011, 11:49 pm

That's a very interesting story, kinda sad :sad: I can't wait to see more :D
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Re: A Wolf's Call

Postby bananahead » June 16th, 2011, 4:36 pm

[quote="TheLionQueen"]That's a very interesting story, kinda sad :sad: I can't wait to see more :D[/quote]

Thanks!
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I will continue! Yayz!
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Re: A Wolf's Call

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Re: A Wolf's Call

Postby bananahead » June 17th, 2011, 3:58 pm

Note: One moon: One month. =)

CHAPTER ONE
Part 2

Koda, a young, inexperienced wolf, protested, "Tonight?! But the pups are only two moons old! They can't make a journey like that?"
"We must protect the pups. I take no more pleasure in this than you do, Koda, but this is what is best for the pack's future. Pups are on the way, and we must move to a better territory. This land is no longer our home, and we must to what is best for the pack." I insisted.
"Where are we going to leave to? asked Iris, and older female wolf.
"Snowpack are our allies. They will give us harbor and warmth until the pups are seven moons old." I explained.
"To Snowpack? We are allying ourselves with... Snowpack?! Are you mad?" Sanje's eyes were wide open as he spoke with a tone of shrill horror in his voice.
"Not yet. But if I do because of this illness-infested place, this pack will be doomed."
"How do you know? We could live perfectly fine without you!" Sanje growled. He was, to my mind, the most annoying and foul-behaving wolf of Icepack.
"A pack is not a pack without it's leader. I do this is good conscience, Sanje, respect that. The pack does what is best for the pups, and our descision is final."
"Your descision more like." snickered Sanje.
I had had enough of this wolf's idiocy, "Enough Sanje! Snowpack has always been good to us! Aurora is a wise and careful leader, and she has not taken this offer lightly. Buck, Luna, stay by me at the head of the pack. Koda, Sanje, at the back. And Iris and Tidra, make sure they don't misbehave." Iris and Tidra were the oldest members the pack, both male and female, and they both were respected.
"Let us leave, for Snowpack territory." I led the pack, forgetting about what I was leaving behind, my true, if not devastated, home.
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