Tonight...(song)

Tonight...(song)

Postby Rathon » May 13th, 2010, 9:48 pm

I'm the voice you hear at night
Just before you cut the light
You feel me watching in the dark
I have come to steal your heart

Steal good and steal it fast
This night tonight will be your last
You won't wake up to see the sun
Oh the fun has just begun

Cut you up
Cut you down
I will cut you all around
Cut you slow
Cut you fast
Oh tonight will be a BLAST!
For me...

Not for you, so siree
You won't go down so easily
I want to make your suffering last
I want tonight to be your last!

You want out, I don't care
I know you feel the evening air
As you watch me grin with glee
You know this won't go quik-eh-ly

Cut you up
Cut you down
I will cut you all around
Cut you slow
Cut you fast
Oh tonight will be a BLAST!
For me...

Because you know this won't end quickly

I don't know why you try and pray.
It won’t help you anyway
I'll end it slow, just for you
I will stop before you spew,
Too much blood, everywhere
You can die, I don't care...

*say this part*
(I told you I would get you for what you did but you didn’t believe me...but now, now heheheh, now you'll pay...you'll pay...YOU’ll PAY!)

*maniac laughing in the background*

Cut you up
Cut you down
I will cut you all around
Cut you slow
Cut you fast
I want tonight to be your last!
*silent....window opens and wind blows in*
-END-
Last edited by Rathon on May 13th, 2010, 10:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Tonight...(song)

Postby FlipMode » May 13th, 2010, 10:20 pm

Wow I like that, good work :). It's violently awesome. Can I just say though: "I'll end it slow, just you you", did you mean "for you"? [/google impression] or is it supposed to be you with like an echoe?
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Re: Tonight...(song)

Postby Rathon » May 13th, 2010, 10:38 pm

whoops, thanks for pointing that out >.<
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