My Best Friend Loi Loi

[SophieCub]

I thought of making a sad and heart warming story.

It is about an eleven year old boy who wants a pet. He is only allowed one and it MUST be a pup or kitten etc. So he picks a yellow lab puppy, it is so adorable. He gets on well with it and calls it Loi Loi, but tragety strikes. The evil dog catcher wants to catch him.

Chapter 1: Pet Shop
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Skipping along the path, Jimmy was so excited," I am gonna pick a puppy!" he yelled. He was not nervous at all. He got to a path that split, so he went to the middle path and finnaly got to the pet shop," I am here!" He yelled again. Jimmy looked in the shop window and saw all the animals. Suddenly his best friend Susan came running along she was getting a pet too. Jimmy gigled," Hey Susan, what pet are you picking?"

" A rabbit, you dumby!" Susan said giggling. They both went in and saw the pets. Jimmy turned round to look at Susan but she was already gone looking at the white, fluffy rabbits. Susan picked up a bunny and went to the counter, then she paid for it. Jimmy watched her walk out with the fluffy rabbit in her arms. Jimmy went to the puppy bit, he looked at all the puppies. A yellow lab barked at him, and then jumped on his sholder. The woman at the counter said," Ahh the puppy likes you, do you want to buy him? You will share a great bond" Then Jimmy took the puppy and stared at it," Ok!" he said running to the counter. The woman asked him," What will you call him?" Jimmy looked at the pup," Hmm good question..I know! Loi Loi!" The woman giggles and gave Loi Loi to Jimmy, he now had his own pup.

Chapter 2 comming up.

[Panda-chan]

WOW.\

[MaryAnn]

This is cute! Keep going! <3

[SophieCub]

Mary: Thank You ^^

Amanda: A good WOW or a bad WOW?

[MaryAnn]

You're absolutely welcome. ^.^