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[mlkfaa] - coolrat's Album -> scarahadi.jpg

Postby coolrat » November 30th, 2012, 10:19 pm

-story-

As taka grow he became more and more isolated from his pride. He spend most the day alone. At least everyone tought he was. Taka who calls himself scar now spend the most of the times with the hyenas at the graveyard. Scar devoloped much hatred towards his pride the only one of his pride he still loved was his mother uru.

There was no hope anymore for scar to become king. In a week King ahadi would pass over the throne to mufasa. And ofcourse after that a young prince or princess would be born. The only way left is when something happens to his father or brother. But could he be responisble for the death of his brother or father. Scar could simply kill his brother but something made him after his father first.

Scar overheard a conversation between his parents. Tomorrow morning his father wanted to have a talk with his youngest son. scar showed a big smirk and ran to his loyal subjects the hyenas to discuss this evil plan he had in mind. The hyenas agreed. after all they had a bone to pick with ahadi. Years ago he and the old king mohatu where responsible for the exile of the hyenas to the outlands and the graveyard where was hardly aver food or water.

Tommorow morning everthing went according to plan. Ahadi took his son for a walk so he could talk to him because hes worried about scars recent behaviour. The two lions strolled trough the canyon. as they walked scar scretly disappeared in the darkness of the shadow. As soona as ahadi noticed he was all alone he heared evil laughs all around. suddenly before,behind, left and right from him stood a hyena pack who where banned years ago. Ahadi being a strong lion could simply take down a few hyens. But a whole pack was to much. The hyenas attacked from all sides. The hyenas managed to took down ahadi. Suddenly the hyenas stepped aside and a larger figure came towards ahadi. it was scar. ahadi yelled at his son to run and get the pride but, he did not listen and stoot still in front of his father. Ahadi looked at his son and could only see cold hatred. Ahadi only could say taka? no taka is dead , he died a long time ago when you gave me this scar on my face im scar now replyed scar. Ahadi said shocked You know I never ment to gave you that scar I wish I could turn time back and stop myself from doing that to you but I cant I still regret for what I did. Can you ever forgive me taka. Taka was silent for a moment and said with a cold voice sorry but no and turned around and said to the hyenas kill him.

scar returned to priderock to tell what had happened to his father. He told the pride that after his walk with his father his father stayed behind to patrol the borders. But suddenly heared loud roars of multiple lions. And when he returned his father was death. the truth remained a secret which scar would take with im to his grave.

-end-

Hope u like it and also hope that my english is good enough to understand.

scar/taka & ahadi(c) disney
art(C) me
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Re: [mlkfaa] - coolrat's Album -> scarahadi.jpg

Postby Schania » November 30th, 2012, 10:20 pm

O.M.G cool
Hi, people
I hope you like my Album!!!
I love Zira :zira-aww: and ed :ed:
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Re: [mlkfaa] - coolrat's Album -> scarahadi.jpg

Postby coolrat » November 30th, 2012, 10:27 pm

thank you :D
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Postby Aina » December 1st, 2012, 12:07 am

It looks simply awesome, both the story and art work! :)
Great job! =D
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Postby coolrat » December 1st, 2012, 11:38 am

thank you :D
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Postby Aina » December 1st, 2012, 1:22 pm

You're very welcome! :D
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