[mlkfaa] - Julie Skywalker's Album -> illegitimate p8.png

[Carl]

It's a Thursday, but my hand is still bothering (just lesser) and since we lost some time between other updates and this is a simple page, I decided to go ahead and give you guys the final page of Illegitimate!

It's not as nice as I'd hoped for, but I think it gets across the point this part was going for and that it does well as an end point.

Part 2, Illusions of Grandeur, is still in the planning stage. I will let you all know when I am ready to begin pages and when I intend to upload. There will be a time skip, though not a big one, between now and then, so maybe that helps with the wait?

[lionobsession]

Wow! So powerful!

[Carl]

Thank you!

[Iri]

I know this is from a few months ago, but I really like the text used at the bottom of the page and Zira's expression. She looks truly upset here and I can't blame her.

[Carl]

Thank you! I don't mind late feedback, it's certainly better than not getting any at all! I spent a lot of time on Zira's expression and pose, but I'm not as happy with it as I was back when I uploaded it. However, I think it's good enough, as combined with the font it does make the page powerful and serves its purpose well. I'm glad it conveys feeling!

[rachel]

I've enjoyed this comic alot.