the Creator

[roxas13]

prolog
In the time before time: there was a godly white lion Named ZenAku since he was alone he started to create animal kingdom. He started out with the lions and aded more animals so on the first lioncub he named Mohatu and declared him his son before then he created the Pridelands, the Grasslnds, and the Outlands. He then felt an evil image spliting out of him it was a black lion. Using all his strength after a long fight with his evil clone, he used his power to send the intruder to one place he knew that the intruder would not get out of (for a long time. End of proilog.

[KiarasMate]

Hmm, typically an epilogue comes at the end of a story roxas13. Regardless of this fact however, if this is the beginning of a Fan Fic, it's interesting and could work although I can't really say much more than that. lol. ^^ Anyways, I'll be keeping a look out for updates on this thread so keep up the awesome work my friend. ^^

[roxas13]

Thank you for yor kind words, I will continue as soon as I can. (As soon as I think of a few more names to throgh in.) The names are the only things I do not have so I do not think you will be hearing from me for quite a while. ( I hope I wont get kicked off for this.)

[KiarasMate]

Oh, you never have to worry about that roxas13. ^^ You would never be banned from MLK for not posting in your Fan Fic. lol. It's your story and you can take however long you need to, in order to write it. Fan Fiction writing should always be for fun and never feel like a commitment, so just take your time and I'm sure everything will fall into place in due time.

[Dutch]

I'll echo what KM said.

Also, it's a little hard to read because some sentences tend to run for a while so just be cautious of that

[K0PA]

this sond good it is like you are going for a Nania story hear