The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby divsalley » December 30th, 2009, 10:18 pm

We've all heard of the Great Kings of the past... But who are those Great Kings, really? I thought I'd go into that in this story

He stood watching the den where the pride lived. He was unsure of what to say to them about what he was going to do. But as he walked, the wind carressed his mane, as if speaking to him, and he understood what had to be done. Somehow he had always known, inherently, what this land needed. Surely this was why he was called the Great Spirit by those who'd known him.

This is part of the story of the Great Aiheu, one of the characters of my fanfic, who goes on to be the King of the Pridelands.

Should I continue??? :P
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Re: The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby KopsTheTerminator » December 30th, 2009, 10:28 pm

Yes please! It's really interesting, plus your fan-fictions are the greatest around! :D
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Re: The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby YFWE » December 30th, 2009, 11:25 pm

Alright, I'm assuming this is another prequel to TLK. Far out, then! This sounds pretty interesting and you appear to be a very good writer, so I'm excited for you to continue this fanfic. Soooooo... yeah, definitely continue!
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Re: The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby KiarasMate » January 2nd, 2010, 11:03 pm

lol, another pre-TLK era story. :) Well, it's a bit too early to say much more than that from what we've been given, but I'd have to agree with Kopa and YFWE when I say, yes, please continue. ^^ Any new story relating to TLK is always worth reading in my opinion and I'm sure your Fan Fic will be interesting. Looking forward to following this story if you do decide to write it my friend. :)
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Re: The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby divsalley » January 15th, 2010, 6:46 pm

i'm close to completing this one now!!! will post Book One soon
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Re: The Tale of the Great Kings-A Preview

Postby Ushujaa » January 15th, 2010, 6:49 pm

Definitly keep going its awesome so far!
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