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A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 8th, 2013, 12:16 am

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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Kal » May 8th, 2013, 12:20 am

Whoa, looking good here, Regulus. Really well written, and what strikes me initially as a very interesting premise. I'm keen to see Mohatu's reluctant crusade against what sounds like a pretty formidable enemy in Rex. He's been through quite abit. Poor lion-guy.

Motivation is my big problem too. Agh. And I now see that you are on Fanfic.net? Excellent.

(Oops, yeah, this was after chapter 1!)
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 8th, 2013, 12:34 am

I put everything in spoiler tags now... because of spoilers in the later chapters. Now the first page looks weird, but oh well. :P

It definitely starts out a bit different than what would probably be expected from a story like this, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Also, I didn't bother to edit the notes from when I originally uploaded it to FF.net, so that's why they're there.
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Kal » May 8th, 2013, 12:37 am

I probably should've waited a bit before posting :P

... but I'll add that the layout stuff you've 'integrated' is pretty impressive also!
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 8th, 2013, 12:40 am

Nah, it's fine. I was actually wondering if someone was going to post before I uploaded all 10 chapters that I've written so far, just to troll me, lol.

Either way, the formatting is still a work in progress, for the most part.
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Dark Huntress » May 8th, 2013, 12:41 am

Very good! I love the story going on! Was very sad when Riza was killed :(
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 8th, 2013, 12:56 am

lol, I'm such a jerk. :innocent3:
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Dark Huntress » May 8th, 2013, 12:58 am

You are, oh, well, I need to go kill a character...
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 12th, 2013, 2:12 am

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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Dark Huntress » May 12th, 2013, 2:29 am

Yes, I rather like him. He's like taking Scar and Mufasa and making them one...very awesome chapter! Can't wait till next Saturday!
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