Scar's Girl (Pg maybe Pg-13 in some of the parts?)

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Scar's Girl (Pg maybe Pg-13 in some of the parts?)

Postby TheLionQueen » May 19th, 2011, 1:15 am

Alma was the only love child of Nala and Scar before Simba was found by Nala
One Day Alma was hanging out with her Dad and he said "run along go play with the hyenas."
"Okay dad." Alma replied and ran off to the gorge where alot of the younger Hyenas hang out. "Hey guys!" Alma said excitedly, "whats up?" The ground shook and the sounds of hundreds of hooves continouesly hit the ground. The young Hyenas started climbing up ledges and stopped at a ledge high enough that the antelope couldn't reach them. Scar was alerted by one of the Hyenas "Scar" Shenzi yelped,"Your daughter is in the middle of a stampede." Scar walked over to see the stampede. Alma hopped up and grabbed onto a dieing tree. She saw Scar standing on the ledge where he threw Mufasa to his death. "Father! Help!" Scar stood there with a smirk on his face,"I needed I way to get rid of that cub,I wanted a boy to heir the thrown not a weak female." Scar thought to himself. Alma fell from the tree into the stampede
antelope started stopping on her and scretching her body. "Daddy!" She yelled. Once the stampede was over Alma stood up and looked into a puddle of blood and water since it was raining. "Oh my gosh." Scar decended down the gorge. "She isn't dead." Scar whispered to
himself. "Yes dad but I'm hurt and its all your fault I hate you!" Alma screamed at her father.
Scar picked up his paw and slashed her against the face leaving two scar across her eye. Alma ran off and was never seen again. She met a lion named Dilan and the started a pride together.

One day Alma decided she, was going to go to see her mother. "Dilan let's go to the pridelands." Dilan replied, "But you said you never wanted to go there again." He questioned. "Well I changed my mind let's go." Alma ran towards the pridelands.

Alma saw Nala on the back of priderock where Scar used to hang out with a baby cub in her paws. The Pridelands had grown back and Scar was dead but Alma didn't know. "Mom!" Alma yelled. And ran to Nala and nuzzled her, "You had another cub with Scar!" Alma shouted seeing
the cub. Nala replied, "Shut up Alma Simba will here you." Alma asked again, "Did you?

Nala replied, "No. This is Simba's baby I named him Kopa." Dilan soon caught up with them and nuzzled Alma. "I assume you are Nala." Dilan stated. Nala replied,"Yes I am Nala, Alma's mother."
"Simba who is that?" Alma asked. "Simba is the king of the pridelands he got rid of Scar and was betrothed to me as a cub." Nala explained. "So Scar, You cheated on Simba with Scar!" Alma said shockingly.
"No I married Simba after Scar died." Nala tried to tell her daughter. Nala turned her head hearing Simba coming, "Get out of here I don't want Simba to know." Nala announced. "But your my mother." Alma argued. "I'm sorry just go!" Nala argued back. "Fine!" Alma yelled and then started crying and ran off. Simba saw Dilan still standing in-front of Nala, "You should be Ashamed Nala, She is your daughter you just can't deny it!" Dilan shouted at her before running after Alma. Simba looked down at Nala, "Why didn't you just tell me Nala?" Simba asked. "I'm sorry." Nala replied. Simba picked up Kopa and muffled out, "Come back when you're ready." Simba walked into the cave with Kopa.
Nala sighed and walked off following Alma and Dilan's paw prints.
"I'm sorry Alma." Nala said to her daughter looking into her eyes.
"Just leave me alone!" Alma said yelling at her mother. "Nala I think you should leave, now."
Dilan suggested in a strong tone standing between Nala and Alma. Nala walked off and left to priderock where Simba had been waiting.
--------------About an hour later-----------
Alma was still crying. Dilan had a reassuring paw around her, "Alma please stop crying I love you too much to see you like this." Alma looked up at Dilan and looked into his eyes, "Your right I don't need her, I have you." Alma said trying not to say the words Nala or mother still trying to get it out of her mind. "Yes, I'll be here for you no matter what." Dilan replied before picking up Alma's paw and putting it over his heart, "It's yours." Dilan said looking into Alma's eyes. Alma nuzzled Dilan before taking her paw off of his chest. They walked off to the area they had taken residence in it was a Savannah like Area with a strong rocky triangular structure.
----------Two days later---------
Alma was now pregnant her belly had a small lump signalizing it well. Dilan nuzzled Alma sitting next to her inside there den during a thunder and lightning storm. "This storm has been going on for two days." Alma observed. "It will go away soon my love." Dilan reassured hugging
Alma closer. The thunder struck hard. A flash of lightning took the skys. "I'm going to find us some food alright?" Dilan said to Alma. "Okay hurry back." Alma stated. "I will." Dilan replied. He took off into the dark Savannah before catching a large Zebra and dragging it into the den. His mane was dripping wet and so was the Zebra. Alma saw Dilan dragging the Zebra in and complimented on his catch, "Nice catch, that's one big zebra." "Only the best for you. Plus you are now eating for two." Dilan replied sweetly. Alma walked up to the kill, "Oh, you can eat first Dilan." "No, Alma I insist that you eat first." Dilan replied. "But it's your kill." Alma argued. "Okay idea. How about we eat together. It's definitely big enough for both of us to eat at the same time." Dilan light bulbed. Alma and Dilan both dug into the Zebra Dilan getting Alma wet with his soaking mane. After they ate, Alma licked Dilan's mane dry.
---------8 weeks later!--------------
"Dilan!!" Alma screamed from the deepest part of the den while Dilan was sitting at the front watching the rain. "What is wrong my love?" Dilan asked walking closer to Alma. "I..Think......Their coming!" Alma replied feeling labor pains. "Oh not yet they must be early." Dilan replied before nuzzling Alma and lying next to her putting his paw on hers.
----------Minute's later---------
Alma was breathing heavily in and out in and out. "Push Alma Push." Dilan said encouraging her.
---------- Five minutes later------------
Her first cub was born it was a boy. Dilan held the cub in his arms licking him as Alma was still pushing her next cub out. This one was a girl. Alma starting licking her other cub out of motherly instinct. "So," Dilan stated while licking the male cub, "What..... Are you..... gonna name......... them?"
Alma pulled the cubs near her chest so they could suckle. "I don't know what do you think?" Alma replied looking over her shoulder towards Dilan. "How about you name the boy and I'll
name the girl." Dilan suggested. "Great idea." Alma said before yawning tired from all that work. "After I take a nap I'll name him, you can think about the girl while I sleep." Alma said before resting her head on Dilan's paw and falling asleep.
---------- An hour later---------------
Alma had just woken up and had the male cub sleeping in her arms and the female in Dilan's. "So did you think of a name for her?" Alma asked. "Yes, after the eldest past queen of my old pride, Lana, she was the most wise strong brave and smart lioness to ever live in our pride." Dilan replied.
"Well guess what both of them will have a name starting with L because I thought of the name Levon, he's a mythical lion who my....... friend told me about, he was said to be the lion who thought of the idea of prides and had the darkest most fullest mane to ever be created, he was strong and thick built." Alma replied.
The rain stopped but the thunder and lightning still flashed through the skys. "You know Alma when the skys take this type of storm, they say that the great kings of the past were fighting they called it the great battle of the kings." Dilan said trying to break the silence.
"Wow." Alma replied before Dilan continued, "They battle over the decisions of the skys and show who was truly the best king and who should guide the lost."
"What a story I have never heard that before." Alma said nuzzling up closer to Dilan. "Yeah my grandfather told me that story as a cub when I was scared of the lightning. I had a good reason to be scared too." Dilan replied.
"Why were you scared hun?" Alma asked. "Oh well the story goes like this, One day I was standing in the rain with my father who was teaching me how to hunt when lightning started
to strike I told him that we should go into the den but he said it was ok that lightning usually doesn't strike in this area. My father didn't know at the time but what ever was the highest point in the area was the thing the lightning would hit. A tall old tree was usually what the lightning would hit. Too bad it was the only tree in the grasslands. My father had taken down a small gazelle and we were eating it. But, we were interrupted when a strike of lightning came down and struck my fathers back. He was alive but not well I got the two males and a
couple of lioness's from my pride and we carried my father back to the den. That was the last of his walking. He would never walked again he would never run again he would never move again unless someone carried him. He was lucky to live but not lucky to be paralyzed from the waist down." Dilan told the sad story.
Alma looked at Dilan with a sad face and replied, "Oh I'm sorry I asked." Alma looked down at her paws. Dilan put his paw under Alma's chin and picked it up to make her look at him, "It's ok honey, It's not your fault and it's fine by me for you to ask about that." Dilan said.
Alma looked at the front of the den seeing a small cub only about half a week older then her cubs walking in, "Dilan look." Alma said pointing a paw towards the small cub. Dilan stood up and slid Lana into Alma's grasp where Levon was. Dilan walked up to the cub and sat infront of it, the young cub looked up and simply said "Help." Before collapsing onto Dilan's paw. "Alma. This cub it hurt, badly and I don't think his parents are anywhere to be seen I don't see anyone." Dilan observed looking at the cub who had a deep lash across the back of his neck and back. Alma slid the cubs under a small den like thing made out of rocks that Dilan had put together for only one cub but Lana and Levon both fit in. Alma walked up to Dilan and sat next to him looking at the cub who's lashes had just stopped bleeding, "Is he dead?" Alma asked looking at the cub. "No I can feel his heartbeat on my paw. What do we do with him?" Dilan replied and asked. "We could look after him for now, or put him out of his misery." Alma gave two options to her mate. "Let's wait 'til he wakes up and ask him how bad it feels if it's
too bad we will," Dilan gulped, "put him out of his misery, if not we will look after him."
------- Three days later----------
The sun had just risen and the cub was in a corner of the den while Alma had her cubs in her arms. The cub had been asleep since he collapsed on Dilan's paw. "Wake up." Dilan said poking the cub with his paw. The cub opened his eyes not even able to pick up his head from the ground he asked weakly, "Help me, please." Dilan put a paw behind the cubs rear and pulled him closer to him seeing the cub was shivering, "What happened?" Dilan asked.
"My parents..... lightning....... gone." The cub said those four words before knocking out
again. Dilan pushed the cub into the crib like structure he had made for his own cubs and walked up to Alma and layed down next to her, "His parents were struck by lightning and died." Dilan said deciphering the cubs words. "Oh what a poor cub, how are we supposed to
raise three cubs?" Alma replied and asked. "Well, if we try hard enough one day he, if he lives can be the betrothed to our daughter. She will need a male to be the king after me." Dilan said putting his paw on Levon and pulling him into his arms. "Poor thing, did you find out his name?" Alma asked. "No I will go ask him in a little while, but first I shall go hunt he looks hungry I am hungry and you need to eat to produce milk for our offspring." Dolan said before standing up and putting Levon on Almas arms. He returned with a large male gazelle still not as big as the zebra he caught but big enough to feed them all a good fill. Alma took a nice big bite out of it and then pushed it to Dilan so he could eat. Dilan took a bite and then ripped off a leg and carried it to the cub, "Eat." Dolan said after dropping the large leg infront of the cub which imeadently woke him up.
Dolan sat infront of the cub and the meat as the cub took a sniff at the leg. He put his mouth on it and tried to bite down into it but he wasn't strong enough. "Could you help me please." The small could said looking up at Dilan. Dilan ripped open the flesh with his claws and replied to the cub, "Here try it now." The cub put his paws on the sides of the leg as he started to bite into the flesh. He swallowed some of the meat after chewing. And went back at the leg trying to rip the flesh himself this time. "So what's your name kid?" Dolan asked. "Hodari." The cub muffled out while chewing. "What happened to you Hodari?" Dolan asked looking at the cubs wounds. "My parents and I were walking in the rain and then lightning struck taking out my parents then they died I ran off and was attacked by a pack of wild dogs, I managed to get away before running towards your home and walking in from the rain. I am sorry to intrude." Hodari replied to Dilans question. "It's ok but how do you feel you have to deep lashes on your back." The cub sat up and looked at to Dilan, "It doesnt hurt too bad it kinda stinging though." Dilan lied down infront of the cub so he didn't have to adjust his head to look at Dilan, "I'm Dilan, welcome to our pride Hodari." Hodari hugged Dilans face, "Thank you Dilan." Dilan pushed the kid off his face, "Alright but in return one day you shall marry my daughter." Hodari's jaw dropped, "Alright my king but I will not marry her until I know who she is." Dolan put a paw on Hodari's head and petted his small tuft of fur, "Okay she is Lana the daughter of Alma and Dilan, the Queen and King of this pride." Dolan replied, "Now you know her and shall Mary her when your mane is grown and you have passed my test. "Great now I gotta take a test to love your daughter!" Hodari jokingly replied before lying down, "I have to sleep I am very tired." Dilan put his head on his paws just like Hodari had just done and they both fell asleep.
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Re: Scar's Girl

Postby TheLionQueen » May 29th, 2011, 3:29 am

I just added new characters if you'd like to check it out

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