Sophie's Story

Sophie's Story

Postby SophieCub » October 7th, 2010, 7:43 pm

This is about my fursona and about her cubbie hood. I want this to be a success (dont know if it will be but it's worth a try). Please comment and read if you can! I really would like your comments! Thanks and enjoy!

Chapter 1
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I woke up after i was born seeing that i was in my mum, Zira's arms. My father, Scar, padded in smiling at my mother. My mum licked my head and tickled my underbelly with her sharp claw and i just laughed. Vitani was my twin but was a totally different colour from me. She was a beautiful cream colour and i was brown. Vitani was also tickled and she also laughed, she began to bite my tail even though she had no teeth yet. I tryed growling at her and I tucked my tail in beside me, cuddling up to my mother. Vitani cuddled too and we where cosy and safe. My mother had an evil smile but i knew that it was for someone else and not me or Vitani. Scar lay next to Zira and smiled at me and Vitani. We both smiled back. We where twins and where twins forever.. or thats what i thought..

When we where cubs we played together alot and had lots of fun. I loved the mud but Vitani didn't, she liked playing at the Outlands waterhole but that was dirty water. We always jumped on the rocks improving our pouncing skills. I always did it well but Vitani always failed. We always practiced our fighting skills and we where both pretty good, i must admit. One Day Scar picked me up and took me to the den and placed me on a rock. I looked up at him nervously I asked him," Whats up daddy?" He replied," I want you to be Queen! I will defeat Simba and you will be queen!" He said grinning at me. I jumped up for joy and thanked him and went off to tell Vitani the good news. I told her and she got angry and bit my paw and ear. Her grip on my ear my and dent on my ear. Vitani got shouted at that night and i felt sorry for her but i knew i had to be happy since i was going to be queen!
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Re: Sophie's Story

Postby TheRoguePrince » October 8th, 2010, 3:03 am

very nice, but too bad about Vitani, I rather thought she was above that kind of activity....overall, very good showing.
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Re: Sophie's Story

Postby Arani » October 8th, 2010, 6:11 am

Good job, post more please! :)
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