ograndebatata wrote:Oh, and unless I'm reading it wrong, what has happened to Timira? She apparently hasn't appeared yet... and well... I now think my idea of what happened to her is firmer than ever - but I won't tell it yet.
We still don't know yet (well,
I know, but the readers and most of the characters in the story don't). Just keep waiting...
YFWE wrote:Good chapter. Glad to see the Outlanders back in the mix. And I will say that a theory I had concerning Timira has been thrown out of the window now after this chapter, LOL.
Hmm, I'd be interested in seeing what that theory is when this story is over.
I really liked in particular Kovu telling what really happened to the rest of the pride before Bianca attacked and he left. Plants that seed of doubt in them, especially Shetani, I'd imagine. That will be interesting concerning the final altercation.
Yeah. Kovu seemed like he had completely lost his backbone in the original SP scene -- not the sort of demeanor I'd expect from a highly disciplined trained killer -- so I tried to make him a bit fiercer and more composed here.
Now I assume we get to see how everyone reacts to Kovu when he returns to the Pridelands. I look forward to it! I especially am interested in seeing what Chaka has to say about all this, since that's a character that wasn't in SP and therefore a character whose reaction cannot be entirely pinned down. I'm sure he'll be more than happy to banish Kovu, though!
You couldn't be more right about Chaka, as you will see... : )
Chapter Thirteen:Once he had reached the top of the dam, Simba had been able to easily climb out of the gorge, but by then his strength was failing and it took all of his strength to make the long journey back to Pride Rock. The sun was low in the sky before he came close to it. Shani, Chaka and Zazu were waiting at the base of Pride Rock, wondering where Simba and Kovu had gone and why they were taking so long. When they spotted Simba approaching with a definite limp and Kovu nowhere near him, Shani hurriedly told Zazu to get help, then ran to her father's side, along with her brother.
"Father!" Chaka gasped. "What happened?"
"Kovu..." Simba wheezed, cringing in pain. "Ambush..."
He fell over onto his side. Shani stared at her father in bewilderment. Kovu had tried to hurt her father. He couldn't have -- he just couldn't! The Kovu she knew would never do something like that...
Chaka leaned his body against his father's, trying to help him to his feet. By then, several of the lionesses had arrived, with Nala among them, together, they slowly helped Simba back to Pride Rock. Shani, however, stayed at the back of the group, trying in vain to make sense out of what had happened.
The pain in the cut over Kovu's eye had subsided by the time he was nearing Pride Rock. By then, the sun was setting, and he was surprised to see a large hoard of animals clustered around the base of Pride Rock. News of Simba's misfortune had spread quickly, and many of the residents of the Pride Lands had gathered, concerned that their king's death might not be far off.
He nervously made his way through the large, varied group, and animals of all species shied away from him as he neared them, creating a narrow path towards Pride Rock. He could hear nervous, frantic whispers among them, and slowly began to suspect that returning to Simba's pride had been a very bad idea. He was getting ready to make a hasty retreat when he heard an angry snarl from the peak of Pride Rock. It was Simba. He had spotted Kovu, and Kovu knew that it was too late to run away now.
"Why have you come back?" Simba said coldly.
Kovu looked up at him, trying to humble himself as much as he could. Chaka was standing at Simba's right side, and to his left were Nala and Shani. Both Simba and Chaka had angry looks on their faces, but Nala seemed worried, and Shani looked downright terrified. She kept on glancing from Simba to Kovu and back again, wondering what her father was going to do.
"Simba, listen to me," Kovu said. "That ambush wasn't my fault! I had nothing to do with it!"
"I trusted you, Kovu," Simba growled. "That's a mistake I won't make again."
"No," Kovu begged. "You don't understand -- it was all Bianca's plan. I was trying to -- "
"Enough!" Simba shouted.
"Dad, please listen to him!" Shani pleaded.
Simba turned to her.
"Quiet!" he snapped.
He turned back to Kovu. Kovu, the son of Scar, so similar to him in every detail...and now even bearing the mark over his eye that had earned Scar his namesake.
"I should known from the moment you asked to join this pride that you are as much a liar as your father was," Simba said. "But you won't be killing me or anyone else in my pride."
The animals on either side of Kovu began to grow more vocal, some of them flinging insults at Kovu or giving words of encouragement to Simba.
"No, please -- " Kovu said.
"Leave the Pride Lands and never return," Simba commanded.
"No!" Shani screamed.
As if they had all become a single unit, all the animals began forming a solid wall in front of Kovu, driving him backwards, away from Pride Rock.
"Simba, wait!" Kovu screamed, trying his best to fight the animals back. "Please! At least let me -- "
"Leave!" Simba roared.
"Kovu!" Shani cried. She tried to run towards him but Chaka bounded in front of her, blocking her way.
"Shani!" Kovu yelled back. He tried his best to make himself heard, but Simba wouldn't stop cutting him off. He kept attempting to push his way through the animals until he realized that he was fighting a losing battle and he was going to get himself killed if he continued doing it. He turned and fled, with many of the animals chasing after him. Even after his lungs had grown sore from running, several of them were still hot on his heels. He kept running until he could no longer hear them following him, then paused and took one last sorrowful look towards Pride Rock, and then continued running.
Simba stood at the peak of Pride Rock, watching Kovu retreat. Many of the animals that had surrounded Pride Rock were gone now, and those that weren't were quickly leaving. When Simba could no longer make out the dark lion amidst the vast fields, he turned around, where Shani, Nala and Chaka were waiting for him. Shani padded up to him, almost in tears.
"Dad, how could you do that?" she cried.
Simba glared at her.
"Don't you see?" he said. "He used you to get to me!"
"No!" Shani protested. "He loves me!"
"He
pretended to love you," Chaka chimed in. "I should have known...I never trusted that Outsider."
"But Simba," Nala said, "If he really did try to attack you like he said, why would he come back here, knowing you knew he was guilty?"
"Probably trying to play the innocent part," Chaka remarked before Simba could respond. "That's what
I would do if I were in his place."
Nala stared sternly at him.
"I was talking to your father," she said coldly.
"Still, I think he's right," Simba said. "He must have been desperate to try a trick like
that, though..."
"But you didn't even let him defend himself," Nala said, raising her voice. "You said yourself that he denied having anything to do with the ambush when it started!"
"That's right," Shani said. "And I know he couldn't have done it, Dad. He just couldn't have! Kovu wouldn't have done something like that!"
Chaka suddenly glared stonily at his sister.
"Just like Timira wouldn't have died in the fire?" he roared.
Everyone fell silent. Even Simba's anger was momentarily gone as he stared at his son in a stunned silence.
"Deny it all you want," Chaka snarled at Shani, "But one of these days, you've got to face the truth. Timira is dead and Kovu was trying to kill our father all along. You can't live in a fantasy world forever, Shani."
Shani backed away from her brother, shocked by his sudden outburst and even closer to tears. She had never seen this side of her brother before in all her life. Could this mean there was also a side to Kovu she had never seen?
No, she thought automatically.
No, it can't be. Kovu isn't a killer. He isn't..."Chaka, what's come over you?" Nala demanded once she had recovered from her surprise.
"Mother, I'm just as upset about it as everybody else, but we can't keep pretending that Timira is still out there somewhere. She's gone, and I'll have to accept that, and so should Shani."
"Whatever happened to Timira, you didn't have to yell at your sister like you did," Simba said. "Especially after what happened with her and Kovu."
"I knew she wouldn't listen to me any other way!" Chaka yelled. "I had to get it through her head somehow!"
"But we don't even know that Kovu is really guilty or not," Nala said. "You might have just exiled an innocent lion, Simba!"
"He is Scar's son," Simba retorted. "His mother said that he was going to be the future king...and it looks like whatever plan she had involved using him to kill me."
"But just because he is Scar's son doesn't necessarily mean that he is like Scar!" Nala cried.
Simba, Nala and Chaka continued to argue angrily as Shani sat nearby, completely forgotten by them. She was thinking about Timira...and Kovu. Chaka was only half right. Though she had no way of knowing what had happened to Timira, she
knew that Kovu hadn't tried to kill her father. She
knew there was some good in him and that he truly loved her. She had to find him...but how?
Shani looked up at her parents and her brother and realized that none of them were facing her. She then looked behind her at the main cave and saw that she was out of sight of any lionesses that could be looking out through the cave's mouth. She slowly got to her feet and began to creep away, towards the slope that led down to the ground. Her family continued bickering as she moved away from them, and she heard no shouts of alarm as she descended the slope.
Once she reached the ground, she hurried into the tall, golden grass and crouched down, making herself hidden among the dense blades. She crawled along until she got to the other side of a large hill -- a place that she knew couldn't be seen from Pride Rock. There, she got to her feet and began to run, following the route she had seen Kovu take. She followed his scent until she reached a small stream. She crossed it and quickly picked it up again, but by this time she had grown so tired that she couldn't run anymore. She walked along, thinking of Kovu, his mother, her father, her brother, her pride and the Outsiders. Why did her father have to hate them so much, when what they tried to do was so long ago? Why couldn't he see that Kovu was innocent?
Shani looked up at the sky. Night was approaching quickly, and Shani shivered. She had never been this far from home alone before, especially at night. Maybe if she found Kovu, she would be safe...