Nala: The story of a broken heart

[Arani]

Thanks axx1000! I'm glad you liked the story! I've got 2 other fan fics up. One is finished and one I just started. Hope you like them!

[Ruko]

Whoops, forgot to finish this Fanfic

Right now, as im reading it, spotted some minor grammar errors, I will correct them once im done reading the fanfic

[Arani]

Ok, thx.

[lemonleleupi]

I've just read this story. I enjoyed it.
Poor Mheetu...

[Arani]

Thanks! ^_^

I know, Mheetu was a great character.

[jelle]

Another story i loved

[Arani]

Thanks, jelle!

[Tawni]

nice! no offence but i like tlk4 better

[Arani]

Lol, no problem! I also liked the other one better. ^_^ Thanks for the comments, keep em' coming!

[dariusgib]

Abslelutly brilliant there arnt words to describe how good that was i loved every bit of it
though then again this is constructive critisms im just asking
1. So was Mhettu adopted not attualy Nalas brother
2. Im one of those people who didn't believe Sarafina is killed. I just dont believe it. Same with Kopa and Mhettu its nt a arguement and i dont hate or dislike your story for it
3. I dont really like bits where they just tell you bits of the film
4. they hid Mhettu in a cave and it took 3 years to notice?. im not being rude its just a bit odd
beside form that
absoulutly brilliant