The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby serra20 » March 3rd, 2009, 1:54 pm

Chapter IV,2 part:

Saidia was out of Pridelands and Outlands already.She was in desert.There was really hot and warm.She doesn't found any water.She was weak,sad...Almost killed by all the things that happened.Even the little cubbie could easily kill her with one jaw,cause she was so weak,power-less,misunderstood...She looked into distance and saw something far from the place she was standing.It looked like a...oasis!Saidia thought that it was oasis,kept her last powers and ran to it.She tried to run fast,but she was weak.When she finally was near that place,she heard a roar.It was a loud roar,behind her.She turned around and saw couple of lions running to her,roaring.They looked angrily.Saidia was scared,but she cannot do anything to them.She just shouted:
-If I'm in your territory,I am really sorry.I ran away from my home and have no idea where am I.Just please don't kill me!
Lions curiously looked at Saidia.One of the lions,the male,asked:
-What's your name,stranger?
-I'm Saidia.I was a member of the Outlander pride,leader's daughter.But I ran away.
-Outlanders...I know them.Where are you going?
-I have no idea...I know that I must go far from that place.
-Then I suggest you to come with us.We will feed you,and you will tell us our story.And later,if you want,you could join our pride.-the male smiled.
-Okay.-Saidia said and looked at others.She was surprised that no lioness was standing near him:everyone were standing behind him.Then she asked:
-I know that this is not my business,but...Do you have a mate?And what's your name?
The male lowered his head.
-My name's Thamini.My pride and the land we live in is called Moonlands.And about mate...No.My mate died,long time ago.We didn't have any children...I am so sad.Now I'm supposed to look for a mate.So,let's go.-he said and walked back to jungle.Saidia followed him.

When they reached the jungle,Thamini looked at Saidia:
-So,tell us about your life.
-Well,okay...I born in Outlands.Whole my life I was trained to be good fighter,cause we had an enemy,pride called Pridelanders.When I grew up,one day I just wanted to go to spy the Pridelanders,without saying that to my mom...So,I went to it,and I saw a lion.His name was Kivu and he was Pridelander's leaders,Kovu's and Kiara's,son.I fell in love from the first sight.Later it came that we had to fight against them,and my mother killed Kivu...I promised to get rid of her for this,and I ran away and I found you now.That's all I can tell.
-Your story is sad,girl...But,your welcome to stay here with us.
-Okay.I'll join your pride,if you let me to.
-Of course!You're very welcome...
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Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby serra20 » March 3rd, 2009, 2:04 pm

Okay,new chapter again.I'll make topics about Thivu and Thamini in Original Charries section right now.

Chapter V:The New Life

1st part:

Year had passed from the time when Saidia joined Thamini's pride.Saidia is happy as a member of the pride.But,this day maked her feel the most uncomfortable in whole her life,and she didn't knew why.She walked up to Thamini.
-I don't now what's happen with me...I feel so bad today.
-You do?-he answered.-Oh well,let's see...-he walked around her.-You look alright.I do not know what's going...-then looked down.He saw that Saidia is terribly fat.Then realized.-I think that you're pregnant,Saidia.
Saidia was shocked.
-Who?Me?But...How?How can I...?-then sat down and looked at Thamini with shocked face.-Maybe it's...No,it can't be Kivu...I haven't even mated with him...
-Well,it can be.It's normal that you can be pregnant without mating.That's all I know.I can see that you loved him so much...
-Yes,but...-she did not finished her sentence,cause she suddenly felt very bad.She fell to the ground and shouted:
-Ouch!It hurts!What's going with me?!
-Saidia!Oh no,not now...-Thamini thought and ran off the cave.He shouted:
-Members!Saidia is giving birth!
All the lionesses ran into the cave.A little cubbie was almost born.One more try...And the cub was laying near Saidia.
All the lionesses shouted from happiness.There was no new birth's in a pride in about 6 years.Now,after all,lionesses we're glad finally having a newborn in the pride again.
Saidia looked at her cub and almost cried.She took him near her.
-My cub...My...My son...-she licked him.Thamini walked up to her and nuzzled her.
-It's so wonderful to have a cub in the pride again...And,I was wondering:Kivu's died,right?So,I think that I can help you to take care of the cub,I mean...To be his...Not real father.You know,I've never had a cub of my own,so,a cub was a dream of my life,and...-he did not finished his sentence,cause Saidia put her paw onto his lips.
-I understand,Thamini.Of course you can be...-and licked his cheek.
-Thank you,Saidia...-he said and layed down near her.-I'll be good father apart that this is Kivu's son,not mine.
-Okay...How we will call him?
-I've thought about a name...Thivu.It will remind the two fathers:me and Kivu.
Saidia laughed.
-Okay...I love that name,and I love both fathers of him:both Kivu and Thamini.-she said and nuzzled Thamini,now her mate Thamini.
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Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby KiarasMate » May 16th, 2009, 5:50 am

Hehe, everyone on here seems to have such great imaginations when it comes to Fan Fics. ^^ This was a marvelous story serra20. ^^ Great plot development and interesting characters. Like Moka stated, I like how you tell the story from an Outlanders point of view. ^^ Very creative and I look forward to reading more of your work as you post it. ^^ Keep up the splended work. ^^

(hopes that Zazu wouldn't really outlive Simba and Nala though) ^^
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Postby CommandoTheLion » August 9th, 2009, 7:05 am

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Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby Arani » July 3rd, 2010, 11:51 am

This was... that was Un-bel-ivable! That's all I got. :)
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Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby serra20 » July 29th, 2010, 12:05 pm

Thank you all for the nice comments! I almost forgot this story, but your comments inspired me to work on it again...Thank you!
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Re: The Lion King IV:Chosen By Spirits

Postby K0PA » January 19th, 2011, 12:02 pm

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