Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the neglected
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Re: Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the negle
by KopsTheTerminator » March 28th, 2010, 12:50 pm
Next chapter is up! Sorry it's so short and boring, I just wanted to show Taka's feelings after the zebra stampede before moving on.
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Re: Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the negle
by Azdgari » March 28th, 2010, 5:58 pm
Awww, poor Taka. =3
Good update, it's nice to have a window into Taka's thoughts. A few typos to be rooted out,
[quote]he cried that much that he ran out of tears.[/quote]
[quote]Fortunately, the great kings of the past pity the young cub and gave it sleep.[/quote]
[quote]He thought nobody cares about him.[/quote]
Can't wait for more! =]
Good update, it's nice to have a window into Taka's thoughts. A few typos to be rooted out,
[quote]he cried that much that he ran out of tears.[/quote]
[quote]Fortunately, the great kings of the past pity the young cub and gave it sleep.[/quote]
[quote]He thought nobody cares about him.[/quote]
Can't wait for more! =]
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Re: Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the negle
by KopsTheTerminator » March 28th, 2010, 8:13 pm
Thank you for pointing out the nasty typos! I'm also known as the typo queen here, lol. XD
Since I'll have a lot of free time the next two weeks, I suppose more chapters will be coming shortly.
Since I'll have a lot of free time the next two weeks, I suppose more chapters will be coming shortly.
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Re: Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the negle
by TheWhistlerify » March 29th, 2010, 11:25 pm
No fanfic is boring.
Wierd that you're writing 2 stories at a time =O
Keep it up on both of them
Wierd that you're writing 2 stories at a time =O
Keep it up on both of them
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Re: Story of the forgotten princes: Taka; story of the negle
by KopsTheTerminator » April 5th, 2010, 2:12 am
Finished another chapter! Sorry it was short, writer's block can be painful.
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