This Land Is But A Struggle

Re: This Land Is But A Struggle

Postby WildSimba » February 28th, 2010, 4:11 am

Chapter 2.1

Blood soaked the bright green grass Jelly was standing on. He knew that it was not only his blood, but that of the enemy. Perhaps he was a bit relieved that he was still alive, after seeing how much blood was shed.

Jelly sat down on the grass, and tied a leaf onto his wound, the leaf which he had found on a tree. He stood back up, and went towards the bushes. There layed the bodies of 4 of his own kind. These monkeys were brainwashed into thinking that they were the enemys, but the lions themselves.

Amoungst the monkeys, was Jelly's sister. She lay there, head face down in the grass in a pool of blood. Tears shed out of Jelly's eyes, as he looked down upon the horrible site. He knew there was nothing worst he could ever see in the world, but the person he trusted the most in the world, in the grass dead.

He saw a little daisy growing next too her, so he picked it. He turned her over, and threw the daisy on her stomach. Her eyes were still open, so he closed them, and continued onto the path of war. The path was already filled with bodies, and smelt highly of death.

Jelly knew not what was ahead of him. But his family knew from the beginning that he was headed strait towards his death. Jelly still too this day is upset that he didn't die on that one fateful day, but unfortunately he didn't. If he had, he wouldn't have too tell the story, and he would have too live with the fact that he had killed the person he loved the most in this world.

If only his sister was here right now too see how much he has changed, she would be so disappointed. It didn't turn out this way in the end, and it was only one persons fault, and that was Jelly's. Well that is what he thought.

But it was really the lions fault.

[Sorry this was so delayed, was a bit stuck on what too do, and now I know.]
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Re: This Land Is But A Struggle

Postby YFWE » March 2nd, 2010, 7:59 pm

Glad to see this fanfic getting started up again! Feel bad for him with his sister dying, though. Keep it up!
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Re: This Land Is But A Struggle

Postby WildSimba » March 3rd, 2010, 4:35 am

Chapter 2.2

Jelly continued too walk on the deserted red dirt path. It filled with the rotting corpses of everyone who had already died. Then Jelly saw in front of him, what hit him withen less than a minute. It was a gigantic lion. It leaped upon him, and started too attack.

Jelly reached towards his knife, but apparantly it had fallen out, because it wasn't there. The lion aimed for the kill, but didn't succeed. Jelly got a good hit in the lions stomach. The lion jumped off, panting.

"I know who you are, traitor!" Said the lion, in a state of fury. Without even noticing what he was doing, he got back up, and began attacking jelly.

Jelly took one of his fingers, and took his tounge. He ripped it clear out of his throught. For some reason, the tounge didn't seem too make much of a difference on the lion. Even though blood was squirting out of the wound he continued too attack.

"Do you not know who I am? You see that little girl over there? I killed her. She tried too attack me, and your here too kill me aswell, I can see that by your attack at my tounge," said the Lion, and attacked Jelly.

Jelly then suddenly found his knife beside him on the ground.

The lion jumped up in the air, and aimed himself directly towards Jelly's Neck. Jelly put his Knife up in the air, and cut the lions stomach open. Blood oozed out of the wound. The lion layed on the ground panting.

Jelly stepped up too the lion and put the knife too it's neck.

"Where's you leader?" he asked.

"W-why w-would I-I-I T-tell you?" pondered the lion.

"Because, if you don't, I'll find him anyways, and then you and him will both tonight," replied Jelly.

"I would rather die, then give my master away," said the lion.

Jelly moved the knife across the lions neck, and in seconds the lion was dead. This was the first real encounter Jelly had with the lions, and now he knew that the hate was spreading too fast, and that he must take out the leader before it's too late.

Jelly continued on his path.

[There will be 2 more posts for this chapter, and then the 3rd chapter will start, which will not be really too gory, but then the 4th chapter will be a bit graphic, because it's the final chapter, where everything is put together.]
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