Nalas Cubhood: The story of the film seen from Nalas eyes

[KiarasMate]

Amazing job PrincessKiara. ^^ I really enjoyed this little story of yours. I liked how you had it in the first person perspective of Nala and you covered all of the points of her cubhood very well if I do say so myself. I don't know if you were trying to be exact with the direct movie dialog, but in my opinion, I think it works better how you have it. Its not all directly word for word from the movie, which leads the reader to believe that it is actually being told by Nala herself, there for, not all details would be completely accurate to the movie itself. This is just my opinion though and if you were trying to make everything exact to the movie itself, that would have worked fine too. lol. I really liked the short bits of stuff you added in that weren't seen in the movie, as it really does set this apart from say, a simple re-writing of the script of TLK from Nala's poinht of view, as we get a bit more insight and detail to what she was thinking and what happened when the cameras went off of her, so to speak. lol. ^^

I think the only small suggestions I could give, would be to run spell check and proof read your work just to make sure all the very minor imperfections are worked out of the final draft. Also, I didnt really see the point in splitting it up into several posts but hey, it's your story, you can do whatever you'd like with it. It just seems like it would have been fine just to post it as one large, and very enjoyable post, but either way, it was amazing and you defintely have some awesome skills when it comes to writing. ^^ Keep up the fantastic work my friend and let that creativity of yours, continue to shine! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

[PrincessKiara]

Thanks Mike!

Thank you, KiarasMate! I wasn’t sure if there was a character limit to posts, so I just split it up. I also have this story posted on my site, where I added images. You can read it here: http://nala-sahifa.webs.com/nalaslife.htm

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

[CheetahCat]

This is a awesome start with your Fan Fiction Solle.

I really enjoy how this is coming out and I must say, your writing skills are truly extraordinary. ^^ I hope you'll write more in the future and I'm honestly am looking forward of seeing more of these awesome TLK Fan Fics in the future!

Keep it up! ^^

[PrincessKiara]

Thanks Josh! *hugs* That means a lot to me. I will probably write more fan-fics later, I’ll make sure to post them here.

[Mike]

I understand why you split it up, it can be a nightmare to edit one huge long post as Moka found out in his own fanfic XD

[CommandoTheLion]

Wow this is soooooo awesome ^^ i love it xD

[PrincessKiara]

Thanks Commando!

[CommandoTheLion]

Hehe no problem im looking forward to seeing more of your storys

[Arani]

omg, this was really good! I also made A Nala fan fic! It's about her life during Scar's reign. This story really inspired me and gave me the idea to write it! Thanks for posting it and doing sure a great job!

[PrincessKiara]

Thank you so much Arani, that really means a lot.