An Unexpected Visit

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An Unexpected Visit

Postby Baya » September 4th, 2011, 5:31 am

(OOT: I'm gone, don't want my work to be on this site.)
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Gone for good.
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Re: An Unexpected Visit

Postby Woeler » October 9th, 2011, 9:48 pm

Great job! I would really like to see you write a story with multiple chapters. I so love your style!
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Re: An Unexpected Visit

Postby Kopalover » October 10th, 2011, 3:38 am

Great job! :3
I love the way you write fan fiction, and how he acts like Scar. :3 Though he is his son, :3
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Re: An Unexpected Visit

Postby Kina » December 12th, 2011, 1:52 am

I never commented on this? O.o

Shame on me!

I do enjoy Mrithi's smooth personality and the way you've written him in general. He takes after Scar, while still being an individual. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree in this case, though. I am curious of the nature of his and Baya's obvious agreement, though.
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