"Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Re: "Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Postby KingKivuli » October 23rd, 2011, 3:00 am

AC i am just blown away. I am actually in tears. There are great writers and there are legendary writers. The fact that you were able to show us such a strong, power scene with faces we know and characters we love. Words can not describe how well that chapter hit me, and played with my emotions. It was a pleasure to read even if very hard

I do hope you find your fire my friend cause this story must go on, if that is how you are writing
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Re: "Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Postby Tekir » October 23rd, 2011, 3:55 am

I usually never read any fanfictions but, while I was browsing on the forum about 1 1/2 week ago, I came across your story and, after seeing the last comment left by KingKivuli, I felt like starting to read it. To begin with, thank you KK for bringing this fanfic up and convincing me to start reading it. AC, the only thing I can say is that I'm speechless as this story is absolutely amazing. I know my comment about it may feel very short, but just I can't say anything else than "Wow".

As for this last chapter you wrote, all I can say is "Bravo". I usually don't really feel emotional when I read a story but my throat felt very tight while I was reading it as I felt tears coming to my eyes. I congratulate you as you've been able to play with my emotions. :lol3: You've got quite a talent in writing.
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Re: "Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Postby Arani » October 29th, 2011, 4:54 pm

OMG the newest chapter made me cry! This story is so good, please keep going! :)
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Re: "Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Postby Renaissance » November 3rd, 2011, 5:24 am

This story is turning out... absolutely...incredible! I Love the plot so far and the characters are beautifully described and I like the 3rd person point of view!
The Idea of Tanga losing his memories is and outstanding Internal conflict. Not to mention the Amazing external conflict caused by some of the other members!*CoughTaniCough*
I think that Tani may seem to be a bit harsh at some times, but at least we know why,darn Maafa.
Speaking of which, Maafa is very cruel, but i think that is the least of Tanga's worries right now.

Well chapters 1-18 were outstanding, and i look forward to the next chapter, Keep up the good work.
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Re: "Lost Rogue" by Australian Chaos (PG-13)

Postby QueenRalexia » November 3rd, 2011, 8:17 am

AC its great your still writing this I love it <3 and hope you continue it :) it keeps getting better and better
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