I read all the way up to chapter twenty. This is one of my favourite fanfics ever and it's so close to what I would of expected Zira's childhood to be like. It's amazing!

Your doing a fantastic job on it. Although I do hate Najisi with a passion.

I seriously can't wait for more. <333
Edit: I was on DA when I saw this pic and it made me think of this fanfic.

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§i ... b#/d1vv04v