Cold-Hearted

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby aloobah » September 23rd, 2011, 4:43 pm

WOW! WOW! WOW!
I read all the way up to chapter twenty. This is one of my favourite fanfics ever and it's so close to what I would of expected Zira's childhood to be like. It's amazing! :-D
Your doing a fantastic job on it. Although I do hate Najisi with a passion. :pissed:
I seriously can't wait for more. <333

Edit: I was on DA when I saw this pic and it made me think of this fanfic. 8-)
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&secti ... b#/d1vv04v
Image Image Image Image
aloobah
User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

Posts: 70
Joined: August 14th, 2011, 3:44 pm
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 3

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Maleficent » September 27th, 2011, 7:40 am

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! It really made my day! Lol, yeah, I made Najisi as mean as I could. ^^ I updated and added a few more chapters if you want to read it.

And OMG, that's the exact pic I used when I was imagining the cubbies in my mind! Btw, do you have a dA?
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
Marcher dans une rue vide, écoutant le bruit de vos propres pas. Volets fermés, rideaux tirés, portes verrouillées contre vous.
Et vous ne savez pas si vous êtes à marcher vers quelque chose, ou si vous êtes juste de s'éloigner.

Spoiler: show
Image
Maleficent
خودکشی یک راه حل دائمی است

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

ఒంటరిగా శాశ్వతంగా

Posts: 8413
Joined: July 31st, 2011, 2:15 am
Location: Alone at the ends of the earth...
Nickname(s): Mal, Jen, Enna
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 77

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Arani » September 27th, 2011, 8:06 am

Wow! I haven't read much, but what I have read is amazing! Keep it up, you're a very very good writer! :)
Arani

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

Posts: 4029
Joined: June 30th, 2010, 8:39 am
Pride Points: 56

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Maleficent » September 27th, 2011, 3:47 pm

Thank you so much! *hugs* You're very kind! I only posted five chapters on here and then I pasted the link to FF.net where you can read the rest of the story since it's too dark for this site. lol I hope you like it! I try and update every other day or so if I can. ^^ Thanks again!
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
Marcher dans une rue vide, écoutant le bruit de vos propres pas. Volets fermés, rideaux tirés, portes verrouillées contre vous.
Et vous ne savez pas si vous êtes à marcher vers quelque chose, ou si vous êtes juste de s'éloigner.

Spoiler: show
Image
Maleficent
خودکشی یک راه حل دائمی است

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

ఒంటరిగా శాశ్వతంగా

Posts: 8413
Joined: July 31st, 2011, 2:15 am
Location: Alone at the ends of the earth...
Nickname(s): Mal, Jen, Enna
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 77

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby aloobah » September 27th, 2011, 4:07 pm

[quote="ScarGirl99"]And OMG, that's the exact pic I used when I was imagining the cubbies in my mind! Btw, do you have a dA?[/quote]
Yep! I do lion king bases that people can use for their characters. <3
My name is Aloobah on there too. :D

BTW do you have a picture of Tatizo? I'd love to see what he looks like because he has quite a big part. I actually feel kinda sorry for him. Why can't Zira love him? :sad:
Image Image Image Image
aloobah
User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

Posts: 70
Joined: August 14th, 2011, 3:44 pm
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 3

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby MuddyMufasa » October 2nd, 2011, 5:12 pm

WOW! I haven't read much, only six chapters so far, but this is awesome! Very wonderful writing!
MuddyMufasa
Mufasa's Biggest Fan

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

Posts: 233
Joined: October 2nd, 2011, 4:28 am
Nickname(s): Muddy, Mufasa
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 10

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Maleficent » October 2nd, 2011, 5:24 pm

Thank you, you are both very kind. ^^

Sadly, I don't have a pic of Tat. I'd do one, but my drawing skills do not exist. rofl
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
Marcher dans une rue vide, écoutant le bruit de vos propres pas. Volets fermés, rideaux tirés, portes verrouillées contre vous.
Et vous ne savez pas si vous êtes à marcher vers quelque chose, ou si vous êtes juste de s'éloigner.

Spoiler: show
Image
Maleficent
خودکشی یک راه حل دائمی است

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

ఒంటరిగా శాశ్వతంగా

Posts: 8413
Joined: July 31st, 2011, 2:15 am
Location: Alone at the ends of the earth...
Nickname(s): Mal, Jen, Enna
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 77

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Katelyn23 » October 4th, 2011, 2:00 am

Wow SG, you are a really good writer. This is awesome so far, well the first few chapters that I've read so far. It's nice to read about Zira from a fan's view since there are so many wonders about her backstory. I can't wait to read some more. Keep up the great work!!
Image

Image
Katelyn23
We are the champions.

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

I be speakin' swaghili.

Posts: 1994
Joined: June 15th, 2008, 9:09 pm
Location: ON, Canada
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 20

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby UncoordinatedPisces » October 4th, 2011, 7:19 pm

You're a really good writer Jen ^^ Keep it up
UncoordinatedPisces
just an oddball

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

I'm getting there, one clumsy step at a time

Posts: 9858
Joined: December 22nd, 2010, 1:44 pm
Nickname(s): Amy
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 149

Re: Cold-Hearted

Postby Maleficent » October 11th, 2011, 6:06 pm

Thanks so much to both of you! I've posted some new chapters the last few days. You can take a look at them if you want. ^^
C'est le sentiment solitaire dans le monde - de vous trouver debout quand tout le monde est assis.
Pour avoir tout le monde vous regarde et dire «ce qui est de la question avec elle?" Je sais ce qu'on ressent.
Marcher dans une rue vide, écoutant le bruit de vos propres pas. Volets fermés, rideaux tirés, portes verrouillées contre vous.
Et vous ne savez pas si vous êtes à marcher vers quelque chose, ou si vous êtes juste de s'éloigner.

Spoiler: show
Image
Maleficent
خودکشی یک راه حل دائمی است

User avatar

Years of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membershipYears of membership

ఒంటరిగా శాశ్వతంగా

Posts: 8413
Joined: July 31st, 2011, 2:15 am
Location: Alone at the ends of the earth...
Nickname(s): Mal, Jen, Enna
Gender: Female
Pride Points: 77

Previous

Return to Fan Fictions

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 30 guests