Faith

Re: Faith

Postby Azdgari » December 24th, 2010, 7:15 pm

Well, this story was all about creating a situation in which Nala could possibly cheat on him. In the TLK universe, Nala would have no reason to, I agree. I created a universe in which she has both a lion with whom to do so and a reason to be extremely angry at Simba. It's very difficult to make an action very out of character for someone to feel natural and that's what I tried my best to do here. It's up to you if it worked or not. ^^
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Re: Faith

Postby dariusgib » December 24th, 2010, 7:37 pm

so is attualy the end of the story a twist for you to decide that she either did or did not cheat on Simba.
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Re: Faith

Postby thechiefyness » January 3rd, 2011, 2:15 am

Well-written and believable. I expect great things of you, and I'll be watching.
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Re: Faith

Postby K0PA » January 21st, 2011, 6:12 am

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