Revoulution the begginings of the Ahadi royal family

Revoulution the begginings of the Ahadi royal family

Postby dariusgib » December 16th, 2010, 1:57 pm

Chapter I Oh Little Town of PrideLands
Though the founders of the pridelands they did not always rule. The pridelands where founded in 30AD when a "heavenly" man went to Primo. The first of Ahadis family and told him to start a pride that god himself would abide. Until the rule of Simba, Ahadis family had wondered for centuries who this man was. But when the arrival of the priest in 1194 happened it was concluded who the man had been. The man had been Jesus Christ.
In 1175 when Ahadis mother Amina was about to give birth to Ahadi in a cave. She was already having contractions and Ahadis father Shahidi, was nowhere to be found as the king Mwinamshi was making him work extra hours. Amina was going through pain with no one to comfort her.
Then a lamb, comming from a higher lord walked into the cave. His wool was a very bright white. Brighter then it could ever be. Amina was scared but the lamb spoke in a gentle voice
"Do not be afraid". he said in a voice full of sympathy and comfort. "I may not come from your lands but i do not come from evil". Amina who could not concentrate from her contractions suddnely felt less in pain. This feeling grew until she could concentrate and understand, like a loving hand had touched apon her. "What do yuo want" she asked her voice ripe with fear and curiostity "Who sent you".
"That i cannot tell you". His voice full of disappointment. "These lands are not ready for the lords touch". "But i have come here to tell you your son will be god blessed. Your family whos god given throne was taken from them will be reconciled, Your son must be called Ahadi as he is the promise of a better land and future. Today on the 25th of the last month. The tryant king Mwinamshi will die and his foolish son Dante will take over. Your son will lead the people who have walked in darkness to a great light."
Amina felt her contractions comming back sgnilling the lambs departure. "Wait" she cried "How do you know". But the lamb disappered with a briight light. At that moment Ahadi's father Shahidi burst into the cave. Just before Amina went into labour.
Chapter II Like father like son
Though Ahadi was a fine specimen at adulthood he was just as much the specimen at adolsent. He helped his father with his varius tasks.
Shahidi was a merchant who collected fruits, nuts, stones and other things to sell for what ever Dante was taking as a cureency at the time.
Though Ahadi mostly helped him just collect things he was sometimes needed when competion gets a little "violent".
Ahadis destiny was started when a zebra herald named Choyo. It was over a new tax Dante was putting forward.
"Are lord Dante is appointing a new taxe on 60% of all income along side all other taxes to build a military tower to enfore order in the area. Also hunting of wildebeast excluding royal servents must be dropped to hunting times of only 1 hour, all citizens found breaking this law will be serely punished and fined."
The people broke out into a frenzy. They could not afford this new tax. They couldn't live on this new tax. They didnt even need a tower. How where carnivores supposed to catch things in 1 hour. A riot broke out and a main speaker aganist was Shahidi. But the approitaly named Hearld Guards constiting of Hyenas (hyenas had not become stupid yet) put down the riot. Then one of them came up with a fiendish plan. Who would be the perfect scapegoat. Why Shahidi of course. He was from the family Dante hated. They executed him on the spot. His blood flowed across the sinful floor.
In rage Ahadi fought to cliam the body. The hyenas seeing they could reap more fun later. Let him have it. They walked off. Sniggering in the distance.
Chapter III Divine Avenger
Ahadi weeping and crying lay by the body for hours, rubbing his teenage half mane aganist his fathers full and flowing mane. He did not notice the small white creature behing him. Its eyes glowing a bright white. And speaking in a voice not matching its own.
"He shall be avenged" Ahadi turned round slowly. "As your father joins the lord in heaven and another drop of blood goes to the pool of sin Dante has created you will rise". Ahadi wiped the tears from his eyes. This wouldnt be just for his father. It would be for the people as well.
"The tower". The lamb continued. "Is a beacon to Dantes triumpth.Destroy it and burn it to the ground. The people walking in darkness will see it and rise up, men at arms aganist the evil that is sin". Ahadi noded and the lamb disappered. Ahadi would make the lamb hear the people sing.
"Ahadi went to the middle of the pridelands where the evil struture stood.
It was already a large pile of rocks. But with trees and wood being added to it. To tall for Ahadi to climb. As he began to give up hope. He saw a little hornbill in the darkness spitting at the bottom of the tower.
"What is your name" Ahadi asked kindly.
"My name is Zuzu" she said. "My family cant afford to live here because of this stupid tower".
exploting the situation Ahadi took two stick rubbed them together to set them on fire. He gave the small one to Zuzu.
Without question Zuzu took the burning torch and flew to the top of the tower. And set it alihght.
As the tower was burning Ahadi shouted in a voice full of joy
"Let there be light, Power to the people".
As many animals were walking home they saw the fire. And they knew exactly what to do.
As Ahadi lead many campaigns aganist Dante he could never destroy the family entirley.
Ahadi then secreatly courted Uru. A outcast of Dantes family. Marrying into the family. Thought Uru was motherly and loving. Dantes seed was planted in her son Taka.
Epilogue
As Ahadis military sucess contiuned his genes went into his three sons. Mufasa and Taka and his illegitmate child Mpenzi. All who carried his military gene. As Mpenzi grew up in Mufasa reign. He met true love with a lioness named Sarafina. But in fear of his brothers fury. He drugged Sarafina so she wouldnt remeber and he didnt return until Simbas reign. Mhettu, Sarafinas son carried Ahadis Military brain and went on to win countless battles for the pride lands.
But seeing he could not win because of the hyenas intelligence Ahadi called apon the lamb who hid the hyenas intelliegence in a stone which was given to Rafiki to keep.
Notes some character like "the priest" Mpenzi and Mheetus military sucess i know you wont recgonise.
It is a taster of a series im making in october 2011. HOpe you enjoyed this
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Re: Revoulution the begginings of the Ahadi royal family

Postby dariusgib » December 16th, 2010, 2:49 pm

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Re: Revoulution the begginings of the Ahadi royal family

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Re: Revoulution the begginings of the Ahadi royal family

Postby dariusgib » December 20th, 2010, 10:40 pm

thanks. It was a kind of thing to keep the idea of the COL series alive which i have a chronicle link for here
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