The Lion King IV: The Return to Pride Rock

The Lion King IV: The Return to Pride Rock

Postby MufasaII » December 14th, 2010, 9:43 pm

Hey you guys! Long time no see. I introduced myself in the zone and never posted anything. To be sincere is that I'm afraid of make mistakes in the words I use, because I'm not bilingual and sometimes is hard for me to write in english. Imagine how hard was to translate my fic from spanish to english and come here to show it to you.

Well, I don't want to rave a lot. Here I got my first Fan Fic. The name is nothing special, altough de story has his special parts. I hope you all enjoy the first chapter and let me know your opinions.

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Chapter I
The new dawn - Part 1


A new dawn was having place in The Pride Lands. The animals were beginning to open eyes everywhere. The warmth of the sun was comforting, and in the Pride Rock, the palace of the lions, the sun shone and made her look stunning, beautiful, a monolith worthy of the great kings who lived inside. It had been two months since the battle against Zira, from marriage and Kovu and Kiara from the reception of Outlanders in the Pride Lands. Kovu, who slept on one side of the Royal Cave, was covered by light and woke up, walked slowly out of the cave so he don't woke anyone and went to drink water from the pond closer to Pride Rock. He thought of his mother, he knew it was bad, but wondered if Zira would change her mind if she would had the chance to do it. Kiara came to his side.

-Hi honey- said Kiara

-Hello- said Kovu

Kiara knew her husband well enough and knew that something was wrong.

-Kovu, what's wrong? -

-Do you know what day it is?-

-Yes, today starts your training with my father-

-That's it. I do not know if I can be king-

-Kovu, you'll be a great king

-I'll never be like your father-

-You have to reign as my father, he does not want to amend the Law of Mufasa does not mean you can not, you will do great things as king Kovu, I know-

Thank you my love

-Is anything else bothering you?-asked the suspect that was something else

-Well ... I thought of my mother, and Scar-

-Kovu, you have to put the past in the past ... Zira was cruel and she could have you killed if she wanted to-

-What about Scar?-

-He's far worse. He murdered my grand father and took over the Kingdom, he let the hyenas enter-

-Well, you've said it "I was raised by the two worst lions in the history-

-Do you really think they are the worst? Have you ever listen the history of Barnabas?-

-No, never-

-Barnabas was the prince of a kingdom that no longer exists, murdered his father, his two sisters and her pregnant mother, was left with the power of the kingdom and died alone and mad-

-Is that true?-

-Yes Kovu, my grandmothers I have talked to all the lions have been cruel, I know the stories from beginning to end-

-Zira told me of one, his name was Loxias-

-Oh yes, Loxias may be the model of evil lions. He deceived his flock, killed the cubs and even his only son, was very cruel-

-Well, I think you clarified your point-

-I'm glad you now know that Scar and Zira does not even compare to Barnabas or Loxias-

Kovu looked into her eyes and saw those beautiful yellow eyes. Was lost in the immensity of his love.

"I love you, "he said Kovu

"I smiled at you, now, can you stop worrying? -

"I promise, " she lied

Butler hornbills flying over the pond and then landed on a small rock.

"Good morning, Their Majesties-

"Good morning, Zazu,"said Kiara

"Prince Kovu, Simba wants to see you"

"Thank you, Rafiki"

Zazu made a respectful bow and flew away.

"Well, I think it's time to see Simba-

Kiara walked over and kissed her cheek.

I'll be fine darling


Thats all for now. Hope you enjoy it.

See you!
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