One-shot: The fire

One-shot: The fire

Postby Arani » November 1st, 2010, 10:19 pm

I just thought of another one-shot and I wanted to put it up! ^_^ This one is about Kovu's thoughts leading up to the hunting fire and saving Kiara. Hope you enjoy! (I know, I'm a huge Kovu fan.) :P

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Kovu starred out across the destroyed landscape. He wouldn't come back here for a while. Today was the day he would move into Pride Rock to start his mother's plans. He soon heard Zira talking to his brother and sister, Vitani and Nuka.

"You must be swift and invisible. She can suspect nothing. Understand?" She asked.

"Yes mother." Vitani answered. "She wont know we're there."

"Good. Now, go!" The two of them ran off. Zira turned and faced her son. "I trust you remember what to do?" She asked him with an evil smile.

"Yes mother. I remember." He answered quickly. She nodded, and they set off. They walked for a while. Kovu hadn't felt grass under his paws for a while. He had a faint smile. The Pride Lands would be full of green and food. And one day, it would be his. They were soon in position. Now, all that was left was to wait for Vitani and Nuka to start the fire. In the distance, Kovu spotted Kiara. He chuckled to himself. She was a terrible hunter! She wouldn't be able to catch a baby antelope if it walked up and said hi! He quickly stopped when he noticed his mother starring at him with her piercing eye's.

"Now is not the time for laughing." She said sternly. Kovu looked ahead, focusing as hard as he could on the mission. Before he knew it, they were surrounded by flames. He didn't move, but almost forgot to breath.

"The plan is in motion." Zira said. Kovu hadn't moved. "Go!" She yelled, and he set out. Soon, he saw Kiara. She had collapsed on a rock. She woke up for a moment as he walked up. He starred down at her, moved her head some to check if she was still awake, then picked her up and threw her onto his back. He started to run. The plan was almost complete. All that was left was to convince Simba to let him join his pride...

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I hope it's good! Please, comment and tell me what u think! ^_^
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Re: One-shot: The fire

Postby Kina » November 1st, 2010, 10:50 pm

*Smiles.* You know what they say about first impressions, eh? Looks like that explained his amusement in the movie about her hunting, all too well. ("You wouldn't survive three days", or along that lines.) I like how you portrayed this scene, though. :)
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Re: One-shot: The fire

Postby Arani » November 2nd, 2010, 2:49 am

Thanks Kina! :) Lol that was the point. I never understodd how he saw her hunting untill I thought about it... and this came up! ^_^
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