A fox in the dersert

A fox in the dersert

Postby Nukascar1 » October 29th, 2010, 3:03 pm

This is my first fan fic but don't be afraid to rip it apart you know helping me improve and all that.I know it won't seem like a tlk fan fic at the start but it will it chapter 2

chapter 1: Escape

Niju readied himself to run as he saw the hunters this had been the forth time this week. Kiador a young grey wolf joined him "Another fox hunt Niju" he nodded. "we're getting out of here"Niju said looking at him
"What.....how"Kiador said shocked how could his friend think of such a thing
"Do you always have to relay on this fox for everything"he continued to watch the hunters.
"Ye...I mean no you always have to relay on me"he growled.Niju shoved his paw into Kiador's mouth "shhh they'll hear us"he whispered "You see the fence over there". Kiador nodded "am going to distract them get it down and get out I'll meet you outside okay"
"yes Niju...be careful".Kiador ran to the gate

Niju smiled running out and taking a chuck out of one of the hunters legs before returning back to the shadows.The hunter fell and was helped back up by his comrades "That little..."he said as the rest of the sentace was cut off by gunshots.

Kiador had broke down the fence and howled as a signal for Kiador before walking though the gap.

Niju started running to the gap in the fence followed by gunshots he smiled and jumped though the gap in the fence as he fell and rolled on the sands on the dersert he shook himself off as he was patted by Kiador "Just like old times ehh Niju"Niju smiled "ohh yes now c'mon we got to prove whos alpha".Niju said walking into the african sunset.
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