The Not So Perfect Princess (PRIVATE)

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Plot =
During the final days of Mufasa's reign, a rouge enters the PrideLands. His name is Naki. He shows off his skills for a bit, prowling about and showing off. Soon after, he is discovered by the hunting party. One lioness in particular, Amyz, is especially rude and nasty to him. The other lioness soon join in. That night, Naki meets Amyz on her way to the waterhole and teases her for a bit. A while after, he asks her to become a rouge lioness and go away with him. Amyz doesn't know if she wants to leave her friends and 'perfect' little life. Over a few days she finally agrees and goes with Naki. Soon after they leave Scar overthrows the land. While gone they fall in love. Years pass and they return to see the pride, they find them almost dead, and in need of help.

Characters =

Naki - Nakisisa
Amyz - Amyz

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"Amyz, hurry up!" shouted one of the lionesses. "I'm coming!" Amyz replied. It was Amyz's first time out with the hunting party, she was only a adolescent though and bragged about being the first one of her friends to make it into the hunting party.. She soon found the rest of the lionesses. "Amyz, you're job is an ambusher" said Sarabi. "Thank you my highness" she replied. Sarabi gave the signal to start and they were off. Soon later Amyz stopped and sniffed the air. She could smell a unfamiliar lion. She ran up to Queen Sarabi. "I beg your pardon my highness, but I think I smell a rouge" Amyz explained. Sarabi looked up and sniffed the air. "You are right, well done young one" Sarabi replied. Amyz beamed with happiness.

[Nakisisa]

Another restless night, another day of eternally wandering, looking for a place to call home, looking for a mate, and if all else failed, looking for a place to find someone to teach in the rouge ways. Woukd that day be today? He thought not, he had been searching for almost a year now, and still he had not had any sucsess, Yet he had never been here before, he was feeling hopefull.

The brown lion sniffed the air, he could smell prey and something he had not smelled in almost a full moon, company; more importantly the musk was that of a lioness...a group of lionesses. A Pride? he mused, walking towards the smell, flexking his body as he walked. Hopefully he could impress one of the lionesses and make one of them go with him.

Near the smell, he realised ther was a cliff, and they were in the vally below, he would have to climb down to find them. No, rather he would try and impress them, Show them what he could do. He quickly climed to the ridge on the cliff and stodd there, staring intently on the hunting party below, the wind blew and ruffled his black mane, pushing out his chest, trying to make himself look impressive.

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The lionesses started to search for this rouge. Amyz was especially excited, what a story she had to tell her friends, they would be so impressed. Amyz padded further away from the hunting party, hoping she would find this rouge first. As she walked she felt the cool breeze against her face, she smiled to herself and continued. She noticed a cliff ahead of her, there was a dark, lion shaped figure on top. "Yes, I've found him" she thought to her self, she began to run.

[Nakisisa]

He had sucseeded, even from his vantage pint a while a way, he could see that the lionesses were searching for him, but what would they do when the arrived on top of the cliff? Who will arrive first? he asked himself, lookinmg around seeing if any of the lionesses were near. some were getting close, and he knew that the time would be soon. He relaxed, sitting down, watching the lionesses as they closed in.

There's a ioness, and she's coming this way... Naki said, but a whisper, standing up again, walking towards the cliff ledge, looking around making sure he was alone. ROARRRRRRRRRRRRR He roared, allerting all the lioness to his presence, showing them he was strong and powerful, showing them that he was im charge. He had found a pride, he had found a kingdom to rule over. Now to persuade them he thought evily

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Amyz jumped at the sound of a full-throated roar as Mufasa, the king of the Pride, hardly even roared like that. She had climbed up part of the cliff and could see the lion clearly. "Hmmm, to bad he's a rouge, he's good looking" she thought to herself. The other lionesses were approaching, having heard his roar. Amyz reached the top and said, "What are you doing on this land, you have no right to be here!" She saw Queen Sarabi starting to climb the cliff, along with the other members of the hunting party.

[Nakisisa]

naki smiled to himself, knowing that the full hunting party would have heard him, and would be descending upon his position, but that was the way he liked it. He looked over parts of the forth-coming pride, he saw how the different lionesses appeared and acted, wether he liked them or if he didnt, the majority were in the latter category.

"What are you doing on this land, you have no right to be here!" The fiesty one he thought to hmself as he puffed his chest up and walked towards the lioness. Sa's Who? you silly little lioness he said, an underlying growl in his voice. He stood so that she would have to look up at him, and allow him to show domenance

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Amyz backed down, and looked up at him. She thought to herself "I'm backing down already!" She stood tall and said "Says me" she replied. She started to get worried, she looked back and noticed the hunting party were closer. "Just wait 'till Queen Sarabi gets here" Amyz added. After a few more minutes of waiting Sarabi finally arrived. "Now, young man, what are you doing on King Mufasa's lands" Sarabi asked politely. "Why are you being so polite, he's a rouge for heaven's sake" Amyz shouted.

[Nakisisa]

Nakisis laughed at the lioness backing down, he looked at her and smiled, thinking about if this lioness would be a good candidate to become a rouge. She had a pretty face, which always helped with the males, and she had a decent muscualr build which she could easily improve upon, yet she also looked young, so she could easily be trained.

Queen Sarabi? Naki asked laughing, Now who would that be? he laughed, trying to phyc out the young lioness, trying to provoke her to see what she would do. yet she stayed quiet. Intersting, that could be a useful traitl, but it could also get us both killed... he thought to himself, loosibng himself in his thought's until he was interupted by a lionesses voice.

"Now, young man, what are you doing on King Mufasa's lands" Naki looked around and saw the female that adressed him. I am... he started before the young lioness interupted him. "Why are you being so polite, he's a rouge for heaven's sake" Naki smirked and adresed the lioness. Even a rouge knows that a youngling should keep their muzzle shut when the queen is speaking[b] He chorteled slightly [b]I am here he said addressing the elder queen To rest, and show you lot, how to hunt. he said with a snide tone to his voice

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"Why are you being so polite, he's a rouge for heaven's sake" Amyz shouted. "Amyz! Please don't interrupt me" Sarabi replied angrily. She turned back and heard the rouge's latest remark. "Now, no need to be rude, we can hunt perfectly fine, you rouge, how would you know anything about how a hunting party works" Sarabi replied with a bit of annoyance in her throat. Amyz whispered to the others, "That's more like it". All the lionesses nodded in agreement.