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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby TheLastLion » February 3rd, 2020, 7:52 pm

(A line of dialogue where Sadie asks Destiny her name and a few more vocal pleads from Destiny?)
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby Stormy » February 3rd, 2020, 7:53 pm

(So are we going to go back and redo it again?)
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby TheLastLion » February 3rd, 2020, 7:54 pm

(Depends on how much you're willing to redo.)
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby Stormy » February 3rd, 2020, 8:00 pm

(Ok then, just start wherever and we’ll pick up.)
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby TheLastLion » February 3rd, 2020, 8:01 pm

Sadie looks down over the edge to see Destiny dangling from it.
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby Stormy » February 3rd, 2020, 8:07 pm

Destiny struggles as she kicks rocks off the side of the cliff.

(Is this before or after the scratch?)
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby TheLastLion » February 3rd, 2020, 8:11 pm

(Right before the scratch. I wanted it so that she tries one last time to lash out, before it nearly causes her to fall and she becomes totslly scared.)

Sadie watches Destiny scrabbling at the cliff face for a foot hold.
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby Stormy » February 3rd, 2020, 8:15 pm

Destiny looks up to Sadie, before she boosts herself to claw Sadie at the face before slipping back down nearly letting go completely.
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby TheLastLion » February 3rd, 2020, 8:20 pm

Sadie steps back, narrowly avoiding the swipe with a small cut. Meanwhile, that attempt costs Destiny her grip on the cliff and she barely manages to get a tenuous grip before sliding down and leaving claw marks. Sadie sees that fear has overtaken her would-be assailant.
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Re: Amends [PRIVATE: TheLastLion and Abyssal_S]

Postby Stormy » February 3rd, 2020, 8:25 pm

Destiny looks down at the plunge below for a moments before looking back up. “Please help! Please, please.” Destiny begs her voice lowering with each please.
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