The post random stuff game :)

[Thegeni99]

yup, take Zira for example. She's the queen of the Outlands.....

[xLilacVixenx]

The lioness has stalked her prey,
She knows her rule and purpose,
To find her meal, once a day,
More would cause meal-surplus.

She could have skipped her hunting, sure,
But what else would she gain?
Several starving cubs, pure,
It would but cause great pain.

She leaps into the air, hoping to catch the kill,
But all that's left of the animal before,
Is a high and squeaky shrill.

Her ears prick up, that familear sound,
She remembered from not long ago,
The pitter-patter of small feet,
To which a cub will show.

The lioness, in doubt, lept at the on-coming sound,
And with tradgedy, landed down,
On her little cub, on the ground.

She cries and tears run from her eyes,
She doubted the sound from around the bend,
The pitter-patter of welcoming feet,
That will never patter again.


This is an actually really sad poem I just wrote. (With several mistakes, I must add) 'Twould be sad if this happened. :'(

[Thegeni99]

wow. that's messed up, she killed her cub thinking it was some intruder :'(

[Simbaholikov]

The lioness has stalked her prey,
She knows her rule and purpose,
To find her meal, once a day,
More would cause meal-surplus.

She could have skipped her hunting, sure,
But what else would she gain?
Several starving cubs, pure,
It would but cause great pain.

She leaps into the air, hoping to catch the kill,
But all that's left of the animal before,
Is a high and squeaky shrill.

Her ears prick up, that familear sound,
She remembered from not long ago,
The pitter-patter of small feet,
To which a cub will show.

The lioness, in doubt, lept at the on-coming sound,
And with tradgedy, landed down,
On her little cub, on the ground.

She cries and tears run from her eyes,
She doubted the sound from around the bend,
The pitter-patter of welcoming feet,
That will never patter again.


This is an actually really sad poem I just wrote. (With several mistakes, I must add) 'Twould be sad if this happened. :'(

D: D: D:
That's so sad..

[Thegeni99]

*bursts into tears*

[Harvs]

It's a very interesting poem. And sad indeed. I'm very impressed by your works Vixey. But everything I've read from you seems to have a sad ending. 'Before the Love' and now this poem. I still love your literary works, but if I were to throw in a suggestion; Your tales do not always have to have a sad fact right in-front of the reader. They do not all have to practically shout "sorrow". You are a very good writer, and so you should explore the style of suttle emotions. Try to capture the emotions of sadness and grief through a suttle phrase or even a word. Even leave the reader's mind to wonder: "What happened next?" Please Vixey, never stop writing. A gift as good as your demands attention and respect. You must continue to write as a hobby at the least. It would be a sin to remove that gift from the world. Again, very fine work. You continue to amaze me with your literary style. I hope that more is to come from you yet.

[Misiziri]

I award Lilac with these pixel-crown!



I founds a bettah crown!

EDIT:

[Taka]

hi iraqi

[Misiziri]

Aloha, Western Samoan

[Thegeni99]

wth?