okay ive know what ive done wrong. And being honest. Thats what it was supposed to be. the ideas where not supposed to make sense all together. They were just basic ideas.
Im going to answer some of the things youve had the most trouble with
1. The tax system. I needed this because the idea is that the lions cant get all the food themselves to feed there workers, servents and guards so have a tax on people so they can afford thesse things. I wanted it to be a basic tax not like inheritance just a tax to help things make sense and to add more representation. I also wanted it to add drama in a couple of episodes one called the bill when Kovu is possesd by Moadiu and calls a massive tax on the outsiders which forces Simba and Nala to break into the outlands and save Kovu. Also in another one i planned where Mhettu to increase Military power in the pridelnads comes up with the idea of hiring abandoned, drifter lions who have been kicked out of prides to fend for themselves and make them soldiers and guards in exchange for meat. But Karma de Medici and zebra in the herbavoure council simply goes "who paying".
2. The Msalti industry idea was a bit of a stupid idea i must say. I wanted to have this thing where Msaltis evil in the pridelands had an effect in the present. Where people would have something called the mark of the lion which gave them gifts that would help man kind. Then I wanted to have this kind of conspriacy with like al sorts of things. As you can see that idea is going to be very re thought
3. Who said any thing about sendin this to a director
4. These are basic. Its very complex and brilliant in my head. But putting it to paper is quite hard. That why luckly i have a whole year of writting i can do and hopefully you the reader could help a bit I have already written the first BASIC script but it is BASIC so it does need editing i will put the link now
viewtopic.php?f=47&t=121844. Yes crystal i am planning to do this in real time. With lions. no unless the goverment invent Amagi. No i am working along the idea of the LKB show where it is people as the animals. However i dint want to use all sorts of pupperty due to its expence and also i wanted to take human representation and imagination to new levels. What clothes i want them to wer i dont know. Im thinking of having a certain colour or if its ragged its hyena or something like that