RP: Vitani's story..

[demi2214]

Here we play Vitani's story. She's a cute cub,but her mother Zira isn't nice to her. Vitani gets sad,and walks into the savannah and meets Kopa. They played,and they like eatother. Then Vitani gtg,and leaves. Zira gets angry and hit her very hard and then Zira leaves,searching for Kopa...

Simba thinks that he's little son is dead.. But that isn't true..

A few years later comes Vitani and other lioness by the Pridelands. Zira is dead,and Kopa returns.. What happening later? We figur out

Roles:

Vitani: demi2214
Kopa:
Simba:
Nala:
Zira:
Kovu:
Kiara:
Nuka:
Rafiki:
Timon:
Pumbaa:

When the importenst roles are full,we'll start

[KiarasMate]

Approved, although you're really going to have to hammer out a more solid plot before this RP can get off the ground, but that's what this section is for I suppose. ^^ Good luck with this RP.

[Gerada]

Nice plot you casted there, but it can call for additional defines. The plot seems to absence the explanation for the story and that's O.K., I understand, you consist as a new member and I suspect, if not, I'm assuming you are green at concocting stories. To abate the constrain on your part, I modified your plot to adapt to the Role Playing story.

"Zira, as we know she is a austere lioness, is draconian to her cub, Vitani. Vitani just wants to be like any other cub lioness, have fun and beguile around with the other cubs. Zira despise's fun and restricts any lion cub befriending Vitani. Because of this, Vitani wanders off into the Savannah and bumps into a lion cub from the Pridelands named Kopa, Simba's little cub. They easily bond and become friends, but Vitani, anxious about her mother's skepticism, returns home and as she contemplated, Zira was furious with her and clouted her across her face. Because of this insult, she runs away, hoping to find Kopa once more."

I advise you proofread my modified version, but if you aversion this, reconsider to revise your plot to a similar way that I did.

[TheWhistlerify]

Wow, this is better then waiting for some1 to write a fanfic about it. I am so playing Kopa

[Simbadacub]

may i be Kopa?

[Azdgari]

While they fight over Kopa, could I try Kovu?

[Nakisisa]

Again im in a fix of charis.

May i play Nala

[FloraTheDarkFaerie]

is kiara taken? if not could i be her?

[Simba3]

can I be Simba? please If it not problem

[Azdgari]

Simba3, if you check out the rules for MLK, you'll see that we typically try to avoid posting many times in a row. Instead, you can just use the edit button in the top left corner of your post if you want to add something after you've posted. =]