A surprise to DIE for! [Planning and short peek]

A surprise to DIE for! [Planning and short peek]

Postby KopsTheTerminator » October 1st, 2009, 6:31 pm

I'm thinking about making a fan-fic about Kopa's death, the plot is Kopa going exploring close to the Outlands and then Zira find him and tells him that she has a surprise to die for. Kopa doesn't trust her, but then Zira sings a song to him to lure him close, Kopa gains her trust and they go the the Outlands, but the Outlanders were there and they attacked Kopa. Kopa ran back to the Pridelands, but Zira and the pride chased him.

So, I'm still thinking of the song and the dialogues, so this is like the idea of it. This came out when I was playing the stampede with mah kittens (no I didn't throw them back to a stampede LOL), I was singing Be prepared when they ran away so I wanted to lure them back. XD So I guess that's pretty much it. Stay tuned! :confident:
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Re: A surprise to DIE for! [Planning and small peek]

Postby KopsTheTerminator » October 2nd, 2009, 10:12 am

A short peek:

Kopa had escaped Zazu yet again to go exploring. He went deep in the Pridelands, when he reached a really barren place. It was the Outlands. Zira and her pride were spying him from the start. Kopa walked away from the Outlands, because the place looked abandoned and it didn't look like aq good place to explore. Zira started thinking. ''Grr... The brat got out of the Outlands. Stay here until I come back with the cub!'' Zira followed Kopa from a distance. Kopa was out of the Pridelands. Zira then walked if front of him. ''Oh hello there, young price.'' Kopa was always scared of Zira, but his father told he to be nice to her. ''Hello miss Zira.'' ''Young prince, I have a little surprise to you!'' ''Emm, I can't now, I have to go- ''Young prince, it's a surprise to DIE for!'' Kopa started running away from her. ''Grrr... I have to win his trust... Oh, I know!'' Zira followed Kopa. ''Young prince, why don't you trust me? Come on!'' Kopa stopped a little and thought of it.

When I think of the whole song and the rest I'll post the fan-fic on the Fan-fic section. Ideas and suggestions are welcome.

Edit: There was a change of my plans. This will just be a short dialogue/poem. D= I just can't think of good lyrics...
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