I'm finally done! I got the The Three Cubs out of my way. And this I noticed not long ago. They all look a lot like Juanra. Oops. I don't know exactly what to say now except enjoy the pic and preview of Chapter One: The Prediction to the plot. The full version in on my site. Just click read more? at the bottom.
Preview: It was a warm morning, the sun was a semi-circle to the horizon against the green plain. The wind was steady and somewhat nippy. So, I expected storms would brew up later into the day. Honestly, I didn't really mind; I spend most of my time with my mom. However, my little brother, Glade, would have some issues regarding the storms. He spends as much possible time he can outside with is friends, instead of family. Which I think to be the true cords that hold your life together. My little sister, Katlyn, might be a tad bummed about the storms. She's what you'd call... a geek. Not being rude or anything, but that's all I can think of at the time that defines her. She's smart, and has a large taste for knowledge. So, geek; in my opinion is a compliment...read more?
Art//Norman//Merrie//The Three Cubs [c] 1Timestones 2013
Nice story! I really feel like I'm seeing it in detail!!! (Ps they're some minor spelling errors so I don't know if you'd get docked on that or not...) on the first chapter I think you wrote he instead of she and one instead of on... and then thru should be through. Sorry I'm not trying to be a bother. I just know sometimes you read it so much you miss the obvious stuff. But I really do love it!
I sure hope not, but I'll go back and look at it and fix that. And through can be spelled as thru, it means the samething. "Through" means to pass by, basically. And "thru" means to push past with force. I'll proabably change a few of the thrus to through. For the meaning. Not a bother, everything needs to be read by another person for errors like that. So thanks! Coolness! That makes me feel good iheartart!
All three chapters are up actually. I Got pics and the previews and my gallery right now. I'lll likely exent it beyond three chapters, but as a side project. I still need to post codehack codes from ps2 game on my site and work on Timestones and Enike.
