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A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 10:18 am
by SarabisMate
My "Whispers In The Dark" will carry you to the light.
As this is "Far From Over".
That's why my "Favorite Disease" is taking it's toll.
As "You Are Familiar".
Is to "What I Want".

By SarabisMate

The bold words are song titles from Rev Theory,Secret & Whisper,Skillet and Daughtry.
I hope you like it :)

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 11:20 am
by Mike
creative ^.^ Pretty novel idea =)

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 3:57 pm
by Kina
I like it, SM. It's creative, and has good imagery. ^_^

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 7:42 pm
by SarabisMate
Why thank you this is quite a first for me. lol :)

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 8:34 pm
by Kina
*Smiles* I'd say you did pretty good, then. :D

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: March 16th, 2010, 10:00 pm
by SarabisMate
Thanks again my friend :) generally this means alot to me. ^^

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 3:30 am
by Ushujaa
nice poem i like the idea of using song titles for your poetry nice job!

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 4:09 am
by RayCat
Very nice poem SarabisMate ^^ very creative indeed!

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 4:23 am
by SarabisMate
thank you I might just make another one. :)

Re: A Poem By Me?

PostPosted: April 8th, 2010, 7:48 am
by CheetahCat
Very nice, keep it up. :)