My Lion King Forum

XD, well ... I thought I'd chance posting some of my poetry here. I don't really write as much of it as regular literature, so take it as you will. Any opinions will be much appreciated, though.


Original-Base Poetry

Form

Missing You
How Can I?
Soaring
Blue Eyes

Fox Fire
A Spring Tale


Freeform

Universe


Haiku

Kitsune Moon
Kitsune Moon (Draft II)


Fanpoetry

Legend of Zelda: Into the Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Warrior of Shadows
Legend of Zelda: Shroud to Light

Yugioh: Envoy to the Moonlight Maiden

Elemental Gelade: Katana no Kaze (Sword of Wind)


Songs

Sparrow's Call
Sapphire Skies

Based off of a combination of astrological myths, though the idea randomly appeared. ^_^

Very good =D I like it, and I think that with some polishing you could make it even better =) Keep it up ^.^

[quote="Mike"]Very good =D I like it, and I think that with some polishing you could make it even better =) Keep it up ^.^[/quote]

Thank you, Mike. I appreciate that you read and commented, and am glad that you like it. ^_^

And, yep, everyone has room for improvement.

My first attempt at Haiku, XD. Based off of the Kistune myth, and the minor myths connected to it. Also inspired by Buson's single haiku:
"Was that a fox"
"or a prince in disguise"
"this hazy spring evening?"

I'm not sure if standard grammar for regular poetry applies to haiku, so I used Basho's and Buson's general grammar, XD.

Well ... I'm back with a poem I just wrote this morning, XD. While it is fanpoetry, the involved characters only make game appearances (as cards). It's something I just couldn't get out of my mind, so here is the final result.

Characters:
Moon Envoy
Maiden of the Moonlight
Lunar Queen Elziam

Envoy x Maiden

Nice work! I really like your poetry, keep it up!

*Smiles* Thank you, KM. I'm glad that you like them, and I plan on updating with more soon. ^_^