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(Poem)

PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 4:45 am
by Nightstar75
:oops: Yeah thats right, I can't think of a good title... But here
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But still through it all,
through the bloodshed
and cold hearts
through the gore
and anarchy
through life
and death
through the concept of vain
but mostly, through love
and loss
Do we finally learn,
people never really do change,
do they?
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And to think I wrote that just as I typed..? :ehh2: Good or no? I wanted to write a poem too :D But I didn't know what to say >.<

Re: (Poem)

PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 6:35 am
by shadowdream
this is really good. I love it

Re: (Poem)

PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 6:36 am
by CheetahCat
Really nice job on that poem, Kirstin. :) Keep up the fabulous work! ^^

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PostPosted: November 24th, 2009, 1:21 pm
by SimbasMate
Very emo. :lol: I love it though. It's amazing. :D

Re: (Poem)

PostPosted: November 25th, 2009, 1:39 am
by Nightstar75
shadowdream Thankyou deary ^^
TeenSimba Thanks Josh-san!! *hugs* ^^
SimbasMate WELL SM XD I am an emo kid and I think really depressing and dark-like, so =O Ummm, DUH XD I can't write happy poetry, just dark and emo. Haha. Thanks though <3

Re: (Poem)

PostPosted: November 25th, 2009, 1:41 am
by MusicLion101
Good stuff! :D however, it would have been more thought-provoking if you were more ambiguous about what the poem is truly about. Using metaphors is good for that kinda thing :P

Re: (Poem)

PostPosted: November 25th, 2009, 1:54 am
by Nightstar75
Haha, I know. But remember, I wrote this in 5 minutes. AND as I was typing. It had NO previous thought, and I was rushing because I had someone waiting on me. XD So, yeah. Thanks though. =3