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What I Am without You(A poem for my love)

PostPosted: November 19th, 2009, 11:11 pm
by LilTiger
"What I am without you, I just can explain it
It seems like whenever I don't see you, forever begins.
But when I see you, forever ends, and the world remains the way it was.

Your brown Chesnut eyes brighten my day
They are like a sun ray
Your voice seems very soothing to me
It calms me, everyday

What I am without you, I just can't explain.
I hope I never leave you
But when in High school, that will change...."

I hope you like the poem I made. :D

Re: What I Am without You(A poem for my love)

PostPosted: November 19th, 2009, 11:30 pm
by PrincessKiara
Very nice, romantic poem, LilTiger! :) I enjoyed it. 8-)

Re: What I Am without You(A poem for my love)

PostPosted: November 20th, 2009, 1:44 am
by SilverSimba01
WOW, this is a very romantic poem, great job my friend

Re: What I Am without You(A poem for my love)

PostPosted: November 20th, 2009, 11:12 pm
by SimbasMate
This is a great poem, LilTiger. Basically how I feel about Mike. ^^ You did a great job on this. :3

Re: What I Am without You(A poem for my love)

PostPosted: January 25th, 2010, 5:21 am
by jonemartin
Great poem. I like it so much dude, I have also sent this peom to my love..

Thanks for that.