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A Horrid Discovery

PostPosted: June 9th, 2012, 9:47 pm
by KingKovu44
A new poem. No mean comments.
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A Horrid Discovery


For the longest time

I thought that Lilly and I

Were our parents' only pups

However, I now know that I was wrong

Lilly and I have a brother

However, he was banished

because of his aggression

His cruel deeds included

Hunting and killing small animals

With no intention of eating them

Now that Lilly and I have pups of our own

And now that our brother is on his way

We shall fight for the safety

Of those we love

Re: A Horrid Discovery

PostPosted: June 9th, 2012, 10:25 pm
by SaultheLionTamer
I cannot imagine anyone wanting to leave a bad comment. :eeh: I love it :kopa2: