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This is a short story about the fate of all of existence and nonexistence. Needless to say, it's gonna be pretty epic.

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Seattle, May 2, 9001: It is far in the future, and Earth's technology has become extremely advanced. Time travel, portals, and other futuristic things have been invented. Yukio, an 11 year old boy, was walking on the sidewalk with his twin sister Jacaranda. They were just going to an ice cream shop not far from home, and had money given to them by their parents.

"I'm so getting Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough!" Jacaranda shrieked happily.

"Well I'm getting Birthday Cake!" Yukio replied. They walked through the futuristic slider door. They paid their money to the employee and got their ice cream. Jacaranda got hers in a cone, and Yukio got his in a dish with a spoon. They walked outside to go back home, when suddenly, they heard a huge booming sound.

"What was that?" Yukio said, starting to panic.

"I don't know!" said Jacaranda, also starting to panic. Suddenly, a huge rip in space in time appeared in the sky. Yukio and Jacaranda's parents were very worried about their kids, but for some reason, they couldn't open the door because of a strange force that held it shut.

The rip sucked the ice cream inside of it. Then Yukio and Jacandra's leftover money and change, and then a couple pieces of trash littered on the ground. Yukio and Jacaranda screamed and ran away as fast as they could. The sidewalk got sucked in, then the road, then some cars, hoverboards, and motorcycles.

"RUN, YUKIO! RUN, RUN, RUN, RUN, RRRRUUUNNN!!!!!" Jacaranda yelled.

"I'm trying to!" Yukio replied. Buildings started getting sucked in, plants, people, pets, and other animals nearby. Then the force was so strong that it sucked Jacaranda and Yukio in both feetfirst. Then it started to suck in the rest of Earth. Then it sucked in the whole Solar System and other nearby stars. Then it sucked in all of the Milky Way Galaxy, then the other galaxies, then the whole universe. Then it sucked in tons of universes and multiverses. The sound was so loud, it could be heard across the whole omniverse. Then, finally, it sucked in the whole omniverse.

It was all over. All of existence and nonexistence was destroyed. Goodbye, everything ever.

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So, what do you think?

Very nice. I think there could have been a little more description of how everything was sucked in but other than that I like the concept.

I know, it's really cool. If it was ever made into a video, this would be good music for the disaster scene.

Flaw in logic: You can't hear sound in space...

If woeler posts in this, it'll be awesome.

Let me correct some of Woeler's points:

4. Humans wouldn't explode in space. Our skin will stretch but ultimately is string enough to contain our bodies so that we will become much bigger, but at least we will remain intact. The issue is survivability, not explosions.

6. The universe right now is expanding at the speed of light. But right after the Big bang, it actually increased in size faster than C. Get your head around that. Also, how black holes behave, if one were to somehow (let's just pretend it does) suck up most of the universe, it will only spit it out again.

U mad, Woeler?