The Fawn of Rising Woods
Posted: August 1st, 2011, 9:01 pmThis is silly, I'm getting rid of it >:U
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Posted: August 1st, 2011, 9:01 pmRe: The Fawn of Rising Woods
Posted: August 4th, 2011, 4:29 amMy favorite sentence: "...dusted off the sleepiness." Very well-written, and the story was nice. I was, however, confused about how much time had passed between the first and second half.
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Posted: August 4th, 2011, 4:30 amThe fawns are no longer newborns but playful fawns, comparable to 8-10 year-olds.
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Posted: August 4th, 2011, 4:34 amHey, I'm really liking this so far! It was written very well! I don't think you need the thesaurus anymore. lol Am looking forward to more! 
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Posted: August 4th, 2011, 4:40 amThank you very much 
But I used the thesaurus for most of this :B
But I used the thesaurus for most of this :BRe: The Fawn of Rising Woods
Posted: August 4th, 2011, 4:44 amNo problem! It's very good! Well, I use the thesaurus for all my writing too. xP
Well, I use the thesaurus for all my writing too. xPRe: The Fawn of Rising Woods
Posted: August 5th, 2011, 11:44 amGreat job Lav'ie you are doing a great job. Sounds like a novel I'm reading about the will to live. It's great to see a story about deer again. Ya know other than Bambi.
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Posted: August 5th, 2011, 5:59 pmChapter 2 is up.
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Posted: August 5th, 2011, 11:14 pmThis is awesome so far! I love your writing. <3
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Posted: August 5th, 2011, 11:15 pm:3 Thank you. I checked this on Microsoft word, it extracted all the bold and italic I had. FFFUUUU-