[Fan Fiction] Kingdom Hearts: Roxas' story

Hey all, this will be my first attempt at writing fan fiction so please bear with me :).
Ok the theme is Kingdom Hearts as you might have guessed, and the plot is centred on the character "Roxas" and starts from his final scenes in Twilight Town and re merging with Sora. It would probably help if you have at least played the game(s) and have a somewhat understanding of what is going on at that point, but if not I hope you will enjoy reading this anyway. It will be updated as and when new chapters are completed.
The Prolouge
Roxas knew at this point that he would be leaving behind his friends, his life indeed. But he had no choice, in order for Sora to awaken and protect the world from an uprising threat, this had to be done.
He proceeded through the lightly coloured laboratory, until he arrived at a rather large door at the end of the hallway, he hesitated slightly before stepping forward and the automatic door slid open.
"Woah." the young boy said automatically upon entering, for this room was white - the floor, the ceiling, the walls... Everything was white and what's more the room was as big as the eye could see. There was however one distinct feature of the room, a large pod in the centre was the landmark, it was a light shade of purple, and the immediate surrounding floor of it was the same colour. The pod was large and seemed to resemble a rose tip in shape, it also had a baffling sculpture on top centre, of what Roxas could make out seemed to resemble the tip of a mighty trident, as if to signify royalty.
After Roxas took in this view he began to step cautiously into the room, still not totally sure of what it is he was looking for. He stopped suddenly as not far in front of him were floating lines of data swirling around very quickly, it was clearly computer coding and appeared to be various formations of the number one and zero, Roxas knew this was binary code, he had witnessed it in town before and during his recurring dreams. The combinations spread and swirled rapidly, taking the shape of a human until finally, there stood a man between Roxas and the pod. The man was fairly tall, and looked very mysterious, he was dresses in red and black garments, looking out of place in the white lightly coloured room, his face was concealed by a single large red bandage that mimicked the look of his cape, and left room for displaying his left eye and mouth only.
"At last, the keyblade's chosen one." the man said in a dignified and deep tone.
"Who are you talking to? Me, or Sora?!" Roxas asked, showing no fear of the man but a slightl bit of anger was clear in his tone.
"To half of Sora, of course." The man replied, showing signs of arrogance.
"You reside in darkness. What I need is someone who can roam in the realm of light and destroy organisation 13."
"Why? Who are you?" Roxas asked.
"I am a servant of the world. And if I am a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool at best" was the strange man's reply, showing arrogance again.
"Was that... Was that supposed to be a joke? BECAUSE i'M NOT LAUGHING" Roxas yelled and he clenched his fist, summoning his Keyblade into his right hand and ran towards the mysterious figure.
Roxas lunged at the man and the sharpest end of the blade struck the man, mysteriously Roxas felt no impact, the blade had caused no damage but had caused a slight distortion momentarily in the man's chest.
"My apologies, this is only a data based protection." he said calmly in response to Roxas' attack.
Roxas turned to him and said "I hate you, so much!"
"You should share some of that hate with Sora, he's far too nice for his own good." the man brightly cloaked figure spoke as calmly and arrogantly as he had done when Roxas first encountered him.
"NO! MY HEART BELONGS TO ME!" Roxas shouted loud and aggressive, making another strike at the figure, this time it simply disappeared in a swirl of digital data.
Immediately after this, the pod behind Roxas, emitted a bright shinning light from the cracks between the rose petals, and slowly they peeled themselves apart to create an opening for the pod. Lower and lower they went, until all petals were gently resting in suspended air, Roxas took a moment to adjust his eyes, and peeked up at the opened pod.
Inside the pod, was a boy suspended in mid air and in what appeared to be an eternal slumber, Roxas knew who this boy was, he had seen him in the dreams, and he knew it was finally time, there was no longer any doubt in his mind, fate really had bought him here and the dreams had been correct all along. This was his fate and it was useless to carrying on pretending otherwise.
"Sora." Roxas said calmly, in the back of his throat, he was clearly upset by the realisation of what he was about to do, but speaking clearly with a brave tone.
"You're lucky...Looks like my Summer vacation is...Over. And with that a bright light emerged from his chest and filled the entire room, nothing was visible in the room, the light was shinning so bright, that it became nothing more than a purely white room.
Ok the theme is Kingdom Hearts as you might have guessed, and the plot is centred on the character "Roxas" and starts from his final scenes in Twilight Town and re merging with Sora. It would probably help if you have at least played the game(s) and have a somewhat understanding of what is going on at that point, but if not I hope you will enjoy reading this anyway. It will be updated as and when new chapters are completed.
The Prolouge
Roxas knew at this point that he would be leaving behind his friends, his life indeed. But he had no choice, in order for Sora to awaken and protect the world from an uprising threat, this had to be done.
He proceeded through the lightly coloured laboratory, until he arrived at a rather large door at the end of the hallway, he hesitated slightly before stepping forward and the automatic door slid open.
"Woah." the young boy said automatically upon entering, for this room was white - the floor, the ceiling, the walls... Everything was white and what's more the room was as big as the eye could see. There was however one distinct feature of the room, a large pod in the centre was the landmark, it was a light shade of purple, and the immediate surrounding floor of it was the same colour. The pod was large and seemed to resemble a rose tip in shape, it also had a baffling sculpture on top centre, of what Roxas could make out seemed to resemble the tip of a mighty trident, as if to signify royalty.
After Roxas took in this view he began to step cautiously into the room, still not totally sure of what it is he was looking for. He stopped suddenly as not far in front of him were floating lines of data swirling around very quickly, it was clearly computer coding and appeared to be various formations of the number one and zero, Roxas knew this was binary code, he had witnessed it in town before and during his recurring dreams. The combinations spread and swirled rapidly, taking the shape of a human until finally, there stood a man between Roxas and the pod. The man was fairly tall, and looked very mysterious, he was dresses in red and black garments, looking out of place in the white lightly coloured room, his face was concealed by a single large red bandage that mimicked the look of his cape, and left room for displaying his left eye and mouth only.
"At last, the keyblade's chosen one." the man said in a dignified and deep tone.
"Who are you talking to? Me, or Sora?!" Roxas asked, showing no fear of the man but a slightl bit of anger was clear in his tone.
"To half of Sora, of course." The man replied, showing signs of arrogance.
"You reside in darkness. What I need is someone who can roam in the realm of light and destroy organisation 13."
"Why? Who are you?" Roxas asked.
"I am a servant of the world. And if I am a servant, then you should consider yourself a tool at best" was the strange man's reply, showing arrogance again.
"Was that... Was that supposed to be a joke? BECAUSE i'M NOT LAUGHING" Roxas yelled and he clenched his fist, summoning his Keyblade into his right hand and ran towards the mysterious figure.
Roxas lunged at the man and the sharpest end of the blade struck the man, mysteriously Roxas felt no impact, the blade had caused no damage but had caused a slight distortion momentarily in the man's chest.
"My apologies, this is only a data based protection." he said calmly in response to Roxas' attack.
Roxas turned to him and said "I hate you, so much!"
"You should share some of that hate with Sora, he's far too nice for his own good." the man brightly cloaked figure spoke as calmly and arrogantly as he had done when Roxas first encountered him.
"NO! MY HEART BELONGS TO ME!" Roxas shouted loud and aggressive, making another strike at the figure, this time it simply disappeared in a swirl of digital data.
Immediately after this, the pod behind Roxas, emitted a bright shinning light from the cracks between the rose petals, and slowly they peeled themselves apart to create an opening for the pod. Lower and lower they went, until all petals were gently resting in suspended air, Roxas took a moment to adjust his eyes, and peeked up at the opened pod.
Inside the pod, was a boy suspended in mid air and in what appeared to be an eternal slumber, Roxas knew who this boy was, he had seen him in the dreams, and he knew it was finally time, there was no longer any doubt in his mind, fate really had bought him here and the dreams had been correct all along. This was his fate and it was useless to carrying on pretending otherwise.
"Sora." Roxas said calmly, in the back of his throat, he was clearly upset by the realisation of what he was about to do, but speaking clearly with a brave tone.
"You're lucky...Looks like my Summer vacation is...Over. And with that a bright light emerged from his chest and filled the entire room, nothing was visible in the room, the light was shinning so bright, that it became nothing more than a purely white room.