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[mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Echoes

PostPosted: November 2nd, 2014, 6:49 pm
by FeatheredSeclude
Edit: This just dawned on me, this is my 300th picture.

Alright, this I can say is officially vent art for me. And a poem I just thought of. I like writing these. These to me actually sound like lyrics, so no stealing them! These are meant to be slow, btw.

My life is full of nonsense,
My world is missing room,
I need some time to myself,
I want a time of soloist.

My wind of no space,
please take your bellows away,
take your clenching claws,
sheath them into silence.

My will needs to be freed,
I need to claustrophobia,
I want to be flightful,
Myself with itself only...

My wind of no space,
stop the senseless howls,
take your screeches,
bury them into silence,
let me live in a world of space.

This is what I need to have,
without it I am a wreck,
I am rude and thoughtless,
inside a wind of no space,
please take you claws,
please sheath them into silence,
stop your senseless howls,
bury them into silence,
let me live in a world of space.

This is all I require from you,
no claws nor howls that pierce me,
just tranquility to be free,
the room that allows me to breath,
living outside a world of no space.

My only request from you...
leave me be... please...

Artwork, Echoes, poem/lyrics [c] 1Ts38n 2014

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 2nd, 2014, 11:13 pm
by lionobsession
Beautiful drawing and those lyrics/poem is amazing! I wish my venting was as creative as yours. Hope it all gets better soon!

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 2nd, 2014, 11:31 pm
by iheartart132
Of the eyes look a bit different from your usual style,I like them! Interesting poem

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 2nd, 2014, 11:54 pm
by FeatheredSeclude
Trying a style similar to Kingdom Hearts/LoZ. That and I am trying to get a younger appearance for the character too.
So thanks!

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 2nd, 2014, 11:55 pm
by FeatheredSeclude
Thanks a lot!
Took me three drafts to get it good enough to look right.
Yup, thanks a lot!

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 3rd, 2014, 10:24 pm
by snowflake754
This is very beautiful, Times! I love the pose and the expression. And the style of the eyes looks different, it looks really good. The poem is very beautiful. :happy:

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 4th, 2014, 2:43 am
by FeatheredSeclude
Where is my cursor? XD

Yup, tried something different, trying to get more a younger look from the character. And the eyes seem to help it out a lot, in my opinion that is. XD
Yup, really like it. I am actually thinking about making it into a song, fyi. Dunno what I'll do exactly about that, but it seriously is in my head.

So... thanks a lot Snow!

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 4th, 2014, 1:33 pm
by Schania
Its look great <3

Re: [mlkfaa] - 1Timestones38n's Album -> 11-02-2014_wipWM_Ec

PostPosted: November 4th, 2014, 3:49 pm
by FeatheredSeclude
Thanks a lot!