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TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 25th, 2009, 7:17 pm
by WildSimba
Chapter 1: The New Cub.

Kiara walked into the valley, wondering where Kovu was. She walking, scared, because Simba had shunned the people who had lived in this place. They were the new outlanders of the pridelands, and Kiara was scared.

"Hey Kiara! I'm over here!" Yelled Kovu, who was on the other side of the hill Kiara was ready to cross.

She walked slowly up the hill and down, to see Kovu standing there with a big grin on his face.

"What took you so long, Silly?" Asked Kovu, still grinning.

"Ehmmm, you ran away, I thought we were going to the Water hole." Replied Kiara.

"Well, that didn't give you much of a reason, you could of caught up with me," replied Kovu.

"I'm not that fast," anticipated Kiara.


They started to walk back to pride rock, to greet their new cub, Uchawi.

"Uchawi! Were home!" Yelled Kiara, when she entered the bedroom.

Uchawi walked out, although he had just woken up. He started to purr as he hugged Kiara. Kiara gave Uchawi a kiss on the cheek.

"Do you know what today is?" Kiara asked Uchawi.

"What?" Asked Uchawi.

"The presentation of your brother, we still haven't come up with it's name yet," answered Kiara.

"I'll be there," Uchawi replied.

"You will, and you'll be nicely dressed, too," Said Kiara.

But Uchawi had a different idea of what he was going to do. He was going to kill his brother, and fake that it was a mere accident. He felt that his new brother would get in his way of being the new future king. So he made friends with three Hyenas. Banzai, Shenzi, and Ed.
They all plotted a plan.

This is Uchawi's profile, on who he is, in case you want more info on him:

Uchawi

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 25th, 2009, 11:48 pm
by Moka
It's great so far, can't wait to read Chapter 2!

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 26th, 2009, 12:21 am
by WildSimba
Thanks. I'm gonna try and limit the violence a bit, to make it resemble an actual TLK movie.

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 26th, 2009, 6:07 am
by Moka
Something we all need practice on. My fan fic is very violent :P

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 26th, 2009, 6:09 am
by WildSimba
It's hard not to make a story about angry lions, not violent. LOL

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 26th, 2009, 8:03 am
by Kovu25
*clap* *clap* awsome thats cool kuddos :D

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 31st, 2009, 2:24 am
by WildSimba
New chapter tonight! Be sure to check back about... 8-9 pacific time, it might be a tad later.

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 31st, 2009, 4:36 pm
by whitewolf17
[quote="Moka"]Something we all need practice on. My fan fic is very violent :P[/quote]
Especially me :oops:

I can't wait for your next chapter WS! Your story looks pretty good so far.

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: January 31st, 2009, 6:41 pm
by Katelyn23
That was an AMAZING first chapter, WS. ^^ Can't wait to read the next chapter. ;)

Re: TLK IV: Darkness In The Pridelands

PostPosted: April 7th, 2009, 8:11 pm
by WildSimba
CHAPTER 2: BIRTH

Uchawi got ready for the event that was about to take place. He put on the radio, and started to place some lighters around the cave. He was planning a special surprise. He then broke into his parents drink cabinet. He stole a few drinks, and hid them in a pilowcase under his bed. He was almost ready.

Uchawi then got all fancy, and took a bath. Thoughts poured his mind, as he got ready for what was comming next.

"Uchawi, the presentation is about to begin!" Yelled Kovu, because Kiara was already on the top of the rock.

Uchawi stepped out of the door, to find Kiara on the very tip of pride rock. All the animals of the pridelands gathered, and got ready for the special moment. Kiara gave birth to the cub, and gave him a quick bath, before the pride got to see him. Rafiki then took the cub, and walked towards the end of the rock, and held the cub up high. The animals all cheered like usual.

Then it happened, an explosion...